Hernandez receives his just rewards (This chapter only available from the main menu - drop down won't find it!)
(#) iwillstakeyourheart 2009-02-25 10:35:31 PMooo I really like this story, Sassy! And C says you never read comic books, but I think your pacing of the story is very comic-book-esque! But then again, I think you are a superb writer =)
Author's responseThank you!! You're far too kind! :)
I have actually started reading comic books in the last few weeks. Haven't read much as yet - Apocalypse Suite, half a Sandman, started Watchmen and some stuff that Alan Moore wrote for 2000AD which I was a BIG fan of as a kid. Getting quite into it now! :D
Glad you're enjoying it!
- Hi there Sas,
That was sad that Gee couldn't fight off the Dreamcatcher's control. Poor Ray never saw it coming, but it must have been harder for Frank to watch as his best friend sent another to oblivian knowing that the same fate awaited him. Frank tried so hard to help Gee gain control.
I love the little twist that Gerard is the nemesis, not surprising though. I actually felt bad for Hernandez because that fate was probably worse than death. But that's what he gets for letting out a power hungry homicidal maniac.
I really love the flow of the story and can't wait to read more.
Author's responseAwww! Don't feel sorry for Hernandez - yes, it was pretty nasty, but then, he did try to kill the guys for his own advancement.
Yes, poor Gee. All the worse for the fact that he's fully aware of what he's doing but just can't help it.
Glad you're still enjoying it! Thanks again for the review, it really means a lot!
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-02-26 06:53:57 PMOf course comic books are a unique medium but just your whole story line and everything have that vibe, ya know? The pacing too ... like there obviously aren't long ass "chapters" in comic books - the details, descriptions and dialogs have to be done a certain way to "work" in the format and compliment the visual aspect. But as I've been reading this story, I can almost see the "cells" in my head of what images would go with your descriptions. It's cool.
And I thought that was a fitting reward for Hernandez.
Author's responseYes, there's a major difference in that I have to describe stuff because there are no visuals, but it's really cool that you are getting impressions about how it would look!
Glad you're happy with what happened to Hernandez - he was a nasty piece of work and, of course, some way down the line, after he's had plenty of time to go insane, will be the next Dreamcatcher.
Thanks for the review, as ever!! :D
- You really are a good writer, and I like how you write this. Hernandez DRAWS comics, and he didn't see it coming...? I don't really know where this is going to go, and I love whats already happened. Please update soon!
Author's responseThank you!! :D The last chapter is up, I hope you like it.