Wow! that was amazing! i love this story sooo much! write more please?
I'm addicted to this story so I'm going to say it HAS been too long, lol.
WOW! I loved it! update soon please
Dude, I love this. I love love LOVE it.
Thanks for updating.
Yayayayayyay!!I'm glad its sorted for now haha
But it was so sad to see frank almost molested again lol
wow....EXCELLENT for Frank's father finally getting caught. Now Frank can live his life without worry. YEAH!!
franks dad is a dick!!
go officer bryar!!!
(#) fen02 2009-03-14
God I was so nervous when I started to read this, and then when she dropped the walkie talkie, I was hardly breathing. God this was so good, I seriously love this story, is one of the best I've ever read, your writing is beautiful.
i hope you don't turn this into a "ferard" story ... it's actually an original story and, for the most part, realistic in that something like this could happen in real life.
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