Frank faces his father...
Wow! that was amazing! i love this story sooo much! write more please?
(#) broken_luck 2009-03-12 08:47:03 PM
I'm addicted to this story so I'm going to say it HAS been too long, lol.
(#) HellOnHigh9 2009-03-12 08:51:36 PM
(#) sock_monkey 2009-03-12 09:20:22 PM
WOW! I loved it! update soon please
Dude, I love this. I love love LOVE it.
Thanks for updating.
Yayayayayyay!!I'm glad its sorted for now haha
But it was so sad to see frank almost molested again lol
(#) doyleangel 2009-03-13 09:45:47 AM
wow....EXCELLENT for Frank's father finally getting caught. Now Frank can live his life without worry. YEAH!!
franks dad is a dick!!
go officer bryar!!!
(#) fen02 2009-03-14 07:32:03 PM
God I was so nervous when I started to read this, and then when she dropped the walkie talkie, I was hardly breathing. God this was so good, I seriously love this story, is one of the best I've ever read, your writing is beautiful.
i hope you don't turn this into a "ferard" story ... it's actually an original story and, for the most part, realistic in that something like this could happen in real life.