[Short OneShot- Frank] He could feel it- deep inside him- that today was going to be the highlight of his life.
- ohmygod, that was cuteeeeeee. :]
I could picture Frankie al scared and stuff... & Gee and Mikey eating all the food. LOL!
I really like your stories. They make me smile. Write more soon!
Author's responseHaha. I felt I needed to add that in for some reason. I really don't know. But I'm glad you found it funny. :D
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-04-11 12:17:06 PMThis is really good!!!! Awwww poor Frankie being scared!!! Gee and Mikey you better hurry up before Bob and Ray eat all the food like you thought!!!!!!!!!!
Author's responseOh noes! Yeah, they better run off the altar after the ceremony and get to the last of the food! ha! Frankie scared... I almost made him pace around and try to tear his hair out. But that seems like something Bob would do, not Frank. x]
(#) whitereflections12 2009-04-11 10:12:39 PMThis was wonderful! It was so sweet and so perfect...I can totally see Frank being that nervous. And I can see Mikey and Gee hauling him off the couch and shoving him toward the door, haha
Author's responseIt's funny, though. The guy that always has a sugar high... nervous? That's why I wanted to do this one for Frankie. And I wanted to have the brothers do something together as a 'team'. So... the hauling out the door was born!
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!
- That was fantastic!! I'm going out, but it was so good, I'm now late and you know what? I don't care!! :D
So, so good!! I want to read more of your stories. You're such a good writer!!
Author's responseOhgod. I hope whatever you were going out for wasn't extremely important- 'cause then I'll feel bad that I made you late.
But, on the selfish side, I'm glad you took the time out to read this. And I'm more glad that you enjoyed it. More glad... does that even make sense? Anyways~
Thank you lots, Sas. :D
(#) Hands-Stained-Red 2009-04-13 09:41:46 AMawww! that was sweet!! adorable, lol i could so see it.
Author's responseWell, thanks. :D
I don't know if I was even trying to make it adorable. I was just tyring to write... something. But it apparently wound up cute. YAY! Cuteness is... well, cute! x]
(#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-05-16 11:39:41 AMI love this one so much!! You captured Frankie so wonderfully. I love your writing......!
Author's responseWhy, thank you! I was hoping I could capture Frank's personality. With his energy, I'm lucky to have even captured his sleeve, let alone his entire self. I hope that makes sense. And I'm glad you like my writing. I enjoy it so much that it's not even funny. Disturbing? Yes. Funny? No.