This is a Lost fanfiction I found a while back, I thought it was one of the most original and best stories I read back then....It features Deuling, different Magics, Different Phoenix and Dumblore x2
(#) makotochi 2009-04-15 07:38:48 PM
Are you going to conitinue it and if so do you have the orginal authers approval?
I hope so I really enjoyed this when it first came out
can you please setup proper paragraphs nothing is worst then ready a story that seems to run together you say i was lost that is fine but please format properly thank you
I hope that you will correct the grammer and continue the story. I enjoyed it the first time I read it. Thanks.
(#) Cateagle 2009-04-15 10:37:58 PM
I believe I've got this one bookmarked over on FFN. If 'tis yours, I do hope you'll clean up this posting and then continue it as this reader would definitely like to see how matters work out. If 'tis not yours, I hope you have the original author's approval and can take this to its final conclusion.
(#) stealacandy 2009-04-16 07:56:16 AM
The story reads as a bunch of walls-of-text and is to much trouble to bother with until youclean it up and reformat it.
That is, if it's actually your story to publish, your note on the subject isn't quite clear.
(#) deramo29 2009-04-16 11:31:13 AM
really i don't care how it reads as long as you continue it. It's a great story.
This story is hard to read and while its i a good premise, the difficulty you have reading it really takes away from the experiance. Other than that I feel that this is a good story and would like to see more.
(#) juggler196 2009-04-17 09:55:46 PM
This is probably one of the better 'independant harry' stories i've read. I like how he is very powerful, yet not god-like. I also like how the other caracters are also powerful and it looks like he will have to stuggle to beat them. This is a great story and i hope it is continued.
However, the fact that it looks like you copied and pasted the story from it's original seperate chapters does take away from the enjoyment of reading it. Even if the story is not continued, it would appeal to a much wider audience if it was broken up into chapters and paragraphs.
(#) Gibby 2009-04-18 09:30:34 AM
Wow its been a long time since I've seen this story. I hope you can keep up the level of writting the first auther and good luck with writting.
(#) archean 2009-04-20 02:17:11 AM
This was a brilliant story when i first read it ages ago and even now it remains one of the better ones out there. I do hope you have the time, the inclination and the old authors approval for continuation.