...Patrick, the other half of his life, was gone...
(#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2009-04-27 01:32:24 PMNooo, to be truthful after the first 2 paragraphs I was already on the verge of tears. I seriously had to turn on FOB to make myself believe that Patrick isn't dead. How could you do this though, kill Patrick on his birthday? Lol well he's not really dead and thats all that matters because if he was then my world would end and as pathetic as that sounds its quite true. Well good job on the story, I guess even though you KILLED Patrick, I guess I can forgive you since its a great story =] And I can't believe Andy would do something like that, totally surprised at that part.
Author's responselol I'm glad you liked it and holy shi I didn't mean to post it on his bday my days have been running together so I didn't even realize what day it was O.o. I sorry Tricky wherever you are! But yes, I made myself cry when writing those bits lol. And thanks for the compliments on it being a great story, I appreciate it =)
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-04 09:01:45 AMThat was so good!! It was so calculated and yet he didn't want him to suffer. Psychotic doesn't cover it. Andy that is, not you!!
Onto the next!
Author's responseI dunno lol if you mean Andy, then by a technicality, you mean me since this Andy came from my creative mind lol But I know what you mean. I couldn't make Patrick suffer, I just couldn't do it, so I'm happy with the way it happened... Though I'm not happy it happened in general. I'm just glad it hasn't happened in real life, you know?