(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-04-29YAY! thanks for updating. sorry about bieng rude, i've always been a little impatient,but i'll stop. anyway, Brendon always has to ruin things, but thats brendon for ya. :) but jon and cassia they were so close!!!!! WHYYYYYY!!!!!!!! BRENDON WHYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! sthis tention between ryan and jon HAS to go away it just HAS 2, so please update soon, i really need the next part :) cant wait
- Hahahahaha!!! Just gotta say I love this story, I think I've reviewed this before, I hope I have. Anyway, just wanna quote my fav line in this chapter: jon and cassia are about to kiss and he runs his hand down her arm, then "cassia tits her head tenderly" hahahahahah that's so awesome, I'm pretty sure it supposed to be tilts though! Don't you just love those little finger lapses that change words and make a while sentence go completely wrong? Love it! Love the story too
Author's responseYeah, there are a lot of typos in most of what i end up posting. I honestly, just don't have the patience to go back and proof read it.
(#) falloutbaby89 2009-05-09And finally I've caught up in this story after Lord knows how long. I think I have reviewed the first few chapters then life took over and I never got to reading much but I'm happy to say that this story has kept its genuine promise to be great. I love it. I can't wait to see how it'll keep unfolding. And Brendon has to learn to not interrupt kisses and keep his voice low. Lol.
(#) doyleangel 2009-05-19hi, new reader here. Wow, this is such an amazing story, I love reading it. I love the whole dynamic between Jon and Cassie (nice name btw lol.) And I really want them to like, get closer lol. Become more than friends, realize they should be together, or at least have Cassie let him in. Oh, it's slow torture waiting and then almost, and then no lol.
Love this story, can't wait til your next update!!! :-)
I had no idea you updated... and now I'm glad I realized you did! I've been missing this story so much=)
Jon and Cassia are being pretty darn cute. I like it. And I love how Brenden and Regina met. That was neat.
Oh goodness. I'm sad Brenden interrupted the kiss. That made me giggle though.
Bah! I'm still so happy =P
I can't wait for more. This story has put a smile on my face since I first started reading it.
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