"If either of you ever has any questions about something other than homework, I am qualified to answer." Ron didn't know if Hermione's words were a bluff or an invitation. But he couldn't resist fi...
- this was nicely written... but i can't seem to get over my annoyance and irritation of a hermione / ron ship... its just rubs me the wrong way...
don't get me wrong the long one-shot is well written and it certainly is fun to see the bookish hermione let her hair (and a few other things) down... but i can't get rid of ron mental picture from my mind...
congrats, and i look forward to more from you... hopefully more harry orientated stuff.
- This is really good. I´m not the biggest fan of Ron, even less of the Ron/Hermione ship, because it just seems so unlikely to happen. BUT..you wrote it very well. It seems real and possible.
About the story in general - it´s easily read, there´s the ambiance...It has all that it should have, being a short story, and I really liked it. Didn´t even notice any grammar faux pas or spelling mistakes. That is a bit rare in fan fiction.
I would like to know more of the story though - a sequel would be nice, or added chapters. Did they stay together? Or not? Did she restore his memory some time later? Did they get back together? What about Harry and all this? I´m not really curious about the girl who taught Hermione, but two or three lines somewhere in a sequel or so would be appreciated - loose ends and all that.
Overall, i´d say you get 10 out of ten for this and a bunch of readers thirsty for more.
Hope you keep writing:)