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Aftermath of a Green Flash
3 reviewsA brief recap of certain moments of the Great Battle from the POV of several women, each playing - or having at a time played - an important role in Harry's life.
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Aftermath of a Green Flash
(#) Psaid 2009-05-28
Ginny csting the killing curse is OOC, especially if not reacting directly towards the person she feels has wronged her (in this case Voldemort), and there were no attackers in the castle at the time of Harry's deathAuthor's response
Strictly speaking, when sticking to canon, you are right.
Fanfic is, however, flexible and I had hoped this tiny bit of artistic freedom of mine would be excused. Still, it's closer to canon than 14-year old Harry having the Veela charm...:DAftermath of a Green Flash
(#) HallowsNotHorcruxes 2010-02-27
This story was pretty good, even if it was pretty OOC for Charlie to let Ginny go on her sucidal murder spree. Very unique wordings, I like how you described things.Author's response
I'm glad you liked this small story. In canon you are absolutely right; the sometimes overprotective brothers wouldn't have let her indeed.
My wordings must have partially to do with the fact that I'm not a native English speaker (Hungarian), I guess this is pretty much visible, hopefully not disturbing.
Thanks for R&R!Aftermath of a Green Flash
(#) HallowsNotHorcruxes 2010-03-07
Hungarian? Cool! Lucky for you, your unique wordings make your storys that much more intresting.
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