AU: 5yr. Voldemort awakes the 6 Dark Emperors, proclaiming himself the 7th. However, the First wants nothing to do with them. He searches for redemption, finding Harry and offering his teaching and...
(#) Under_score 2009-06-05 11:46:32 PMInteresting premise but its already falling into the well worn cliche of mentoring Harry.
Also somehow I don't see Voldemort being frightened of anything other than death, even a Super powered OC. Maybe if you had the Super powered OC out to kill Harry, I would continue to read it.
- Plot sounds different and, though the start is good, the chapter lacked a certain connection to the characters.
It would have been easier if you had just given some history about the character than just start off with a dialogue with serenity whereby you make the user patch in bits and pieces of the information. keeps the mind ticking but not sure if it would keep the reader interested :)