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Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors

by CloudPhoenix 4 Reviews

AU: 5yr. Voldemort awakes the 6 Dark Emperors, proclaiming himself the 7th. However, the First wants nothing to do with them. He searches for redemption, finding Harry and offering his teaching and...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Fantasy,Parody - Characters: Ginny,Harry,Luna - Warnings: [!!] [V] [X] - Published: 2009/06/05 - Updated: 2009/06/05 - 1897 words

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  • Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors

    (#) NacNud 2009-06-05 07:08:44 PM

    Interesting start. I look forward to see what you do with the story.

    Keep up the good work.
  • Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors

    (#) Under_score 2009-06-05 11:46:32 PM

    Interesting premise but its already falling into the well worn cliche of mentoring Harry.

    Also somehow I don't see Voldemort being frightened of anything other than death, even a Super powered OC. Maybe if you had the Super powered OC out to kill Harry, I would continue to read it.
  • Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors

    (#) shaman_king 2009-06-15 04:07:31 PM

    Good story. I'm starting to think someone's got a personal thing against you, all your stories are poorly rated, undeservingly I might add.
  • Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors

    (#) i_king 2009-07-04 05:30:07 AM

    Plot sounds different and, though the start is good, the chapter lacked a certain connection to the characters.
    It would have been easier if you had just given some history about the character than just start off with a dialogue with serenity whereby you make the user patch in bits and pieces of the information. keeps the mind ticking but not sure if it would keep the reader interested :)
    Carry on

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