I'm Made Of Wax, Larry, What Are You Made Of? - A Day To Remember
(#) CaroBECKETT 2009-06-06 09:55:55 PMThis story is quite brilliant.
Pj's thoughts are so involving, so twisted, so calculated, it makes me afraid of her.
This is kind of like the holocaust on vampires (sorry, I have a twisted obsession with the Holocaust)
Aww, poor Pete, he's sucha cute brother.
I frown upon these doctor people, I want to hit them.
And oh em jizzles, nooo, Joe ! I love him ! So much pain. Poor him !
You need to update soon, I need to know what happens to everyone cause ill die if I don't.
Yeah, PJ is really hard to write, because I'm kind of scared of her too :(
Pete and Joe
you used such words that i actually had to look them up.. i was like...
"i was never good at chemistry, but i know this... but let me look it up for clarification.." and i did. i'm a geek like that.
I really enjoy this story, its different from most vampire stories, and it gets you thinking on such other levels of a massive Holocaust... (dear caro, don't worry, i do too. x.x)
the story is really interesting, and i'm super pumped to see where it goes from here, and what sort of nusance PJ gets into... bwaha, i know that there has to be a soul behind those dead eyes of hers.
update soonish, please? i need to know what sort of ridiculousness goes on in here.
(OH! and i get the review comment, btw... ridiculousssss! lol, and way HXC... hardcore is my new favorite word, i've decided. lol)
Author's responseahaha sorry! PSAT words. I'm starting early.
thank you! :D
(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-07 10:05:50 AMHahahaha dude. Harper. I know what you mean on the words. I was reading and was like lets go on google real quick... :)
But thats good! (using words I dont know)
While reading that Joe was the 'blonde boy' I was like 'oh so its like supposed to be realese the bats duck hunt joe'.
You're an amazing writer, dude.
PJ's sick mind totally blew me away.
(And yes Caro, I also have a holocaust obsession along with an obsession with high school shootings like columbine O_O)
Ahhhh I love this story. :)
The doctors kinda creeped me out though.
Espesically the guy.
Great chapter. :)
Author's responseI will force you to learn haha
eee thanks! :D
yuck. I know. that's the next chapter took so long.
- This is absolutely amazing. I love the way PJ tells the story, it's very detailed and twisted.
And it seems everyone who reviewed so far has a holocaust obsession (as do I, guilty with a columbine too.)
But anyway, great story. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Author's responseThank you! :D