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Ghost In The Mirror

Um... I'm no good at this xP just read plz? It's my first fanfic so take pity :( just a very short kind of depressing one shot

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2009/06/12 - Updated: 2009/06/12 - 160 words

Reviews

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) X-InkyBlackLace-X 2009-06-12 01:31:20 PM

  It kinda depressed me..
  but iI like being depressed so well done XD
  You seem like a good writer.
  I want MOARRRRRR!
  huggles
  

  Author's response

  Thankee :D lolz I like being depressed too xD

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-12 02:01:43 PM

  Aw, that's so sad! It almost reminds me of how I used to be(minus all the drugs and alcohol). Well..pot makes you do that too..be all depressed and shizz..
  
  I wrote a pretty sad..sort of..one-shot that you might like..and I dunno if it'll help or anything, but you seem like the type of writer that writes best when depressed so.. I dunno. But anything to help. And I'm not judging you, I'm just really tired cos I just woke up and I feel like rambling on and on and on and BLAH!
  
  So anyway, you should check some of my stuff out. And I'll be right beside you reviewing every time you update XD
  
  REVENGE

  Author's response

  Gahh well I wasn't depressed :D in fact I'm totally effn happaaayy xD it was supposed to be in gerard's POV but I screwed up xP

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-12 03:41:13 PM

  Oh well... GERARD IS AMAZING AND DOES DRUGS COS HE'S A SEXY MOFO!!
  
  lmao just HAD to add that...
  
  REVENGE

  Author's response

  Lmfao xD OMFG he's so fcuking nice tho :3
  FRANK IS FUNSIZED YØ! xD

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:25:54 PM

  HEY HEY HEY! THAT'S MY NAME! IDENTITY THEFT! IMA CALL THE COPS ON YOU MOFO! WTF ASKLDJALSKDJLAKSJDKLA MY NAME! MINE!!!!!!! Okay, I'm done freaking out about that.
  
  Anyway. Your story. It was...really short, and people above me are saying it was sad, but I personally thought it was way to short to be ANYTHING. Granted, you have a good writing style...but you need to write more than that, I think in order to give off a legitimate message or cause anyone to feel anything deep. Keep writing.

  Author's response

  Dx I sorry! I blanked on a name lol. And I know it was über short but you give good advice! :D and thank youhz

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:37:39 PM

  I'm a nitpick. So I'd also like to point out this line:
  
  It's almost masochistic, the way I like to receive my own pain; I'm like a sadist, but only to myself.
  
  A sadist to yourself IS a masochist...in which case, it wouldn't be ALMOST masochistic, it would be masochistic. I advise you to write something else there.
  
  
  

  Author's response

  Thankee for the help :D yeah i'm new to this shizzle xP so I'm gonna fcuk up a lot

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) billparsons 2009-06-12 06:04:24 PM

  You really aren't nothing more than an asshole and I disagree - your writing style is beyond awful.

  Author's response

  If it's so bad why'd you read EVERYTHING I've written?:) hmmm? Let's see I've actually put some effort into it while you don't write shit and I'm new to it. :) bye bye

• Ghost In The Mirror

  (#) MadiLuvsGeebear 2009-06-25 03:17:57 PM

  that depressed me..........
  but ur a rlly good writer! write more! I WANT MORE WRITNING WOMAN LOL!!!! XD

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