Um... I'm no good at this xP just read plz? It's my first fanfic so take pity :( just a very short kind of depressing one shot
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-12 02:01:43 PMAw, that's so sad! It almost reminds me of how I used to be(minus all the drugs and alcohol). Well..pot makes you do that too..be all depressed and shizz..
I wrote a pretty sad..sort of..one-shot that you might like..and I dunno if it'll help or anything, but you seem like the type of writer that writes best when depressed so.. I dunno. But anything to help. And I'm not judging you, I'm just really tired cos I just woke up and I feel like rambling on and on and on and BLAH!
So anyway, you should check some of my stuff out. And I'll be right beside you reviewing every time you update XD
Author's responseGahh well I wasn't depressed :D in fact I'm totally effn happaaayy xD it was supposed to be in gerard's POV but I screwed up xP
(#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:25:54 PMHEY HEY HEY! THAT'S MY NAME! IDENTITY THEFT! IMA CALL THE COPS ON YOU MOFO! WTF ASKLDJALSKDJLAKSJDKLA MY NAME! MINE!!!!!!! Okay, I'm done freaking out about that.
Anyway. Your story. It was...really short, and people above me are saying it was sad, but I personally thought it was way to short to be ANYTHING. Granted, you have a good writing style...but you need to write more than that, I think in order to give off a legitimate message or cause anyone to feel anything deep. Keep writing.
Author's responseDx I sorry! I blanked on a name lol. And I know it was über short but you give good advice! :D and thank youhz
(#) IeroMyHero 2009-06-12 05:37:39 PMI'm a nitpick. So I'd also like to point out this line:
It's almost masochistic, the way I like to receive my own pain; I'm like a sadist, but only to myself.
A sadist to yourself IS a masochist...in which case, it wouldn't be ALMOST masochistic, it would be masochistic. I advise you to write something else there.
Author's responseThankee for the help :D yeah i'm new to this shizzle xP so I'm gonna fcuk up a lot
(#) billparsons 2009-06-12 06:04:24 PMYou really aren't nothing more than an asshole and I disagree - your writing style is beyond awful.
Author's responseIf it's so bad why'd you read EVERYTHING I've written?:) hmmm? Let's see I've actually put some effort into it while you don't write shit and I'm new to it. :) bye bye