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Chapter: 002

The Machinist - Conditions

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2009/06/14 - Updated: 2009/06/14 - 4836 words

Reviews

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-06-14 10:03:06 AM

  Ah, dude, that's so fucking great.
  
  I love it.
  
  Dude, poor Pete.
  Andy really pisses me off I don't knoww hy.
  I love Trick though, he's sweet.
  
  And PJ is a strong little soldier, I think id be one of those people who just take death.
  
  I know that story can't end there, so write ! Because I want to hear it.
  
  :)
  
  Update soon.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-14 10:57:53 AM

  Whoa. You know, normally I do pretty well with cliff-hangers, but...damn, I'm probably going to check this story too often just to see if it updated...
  
  This was serisouly amazing, dude.
  Like, 'I don't even know what to say' amazing.
  Fucking speechless.
  And I'm never speechless.
  
  When Pete said, "Fuck you, PJ" I was just like 'FINALLY SOMEONE SAYS IT!'
  
  I mean she's awesome, but she didn't care about them so why should they right?
  But yeah, poor Pete.. :(
  
  I don't know if I could say I'd be like PJ and accept death, because honestly, I've never been in that situation (duhhh) sooo.. I mean, if I said, 'yeah I would've gone down with a fight' that would've just been bullshit.
  And I don't like bullshitting people.
  
  Ahhh I love Patrick. You have no idea.
  AND POOR TROHMANIA!! D:
  
  Ahhhh I loved this chappy.
  And I love this story.
  ANd I loves you!
  
  :)
  
  -Natalie

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) _nox_ 2009-06-14 12:46:18 PM

  You are so very talented.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-06-14 02:08:35 PM

  What are you, the modern Einstine? You got him in your genes for sure kiddo, you fucking genius! This is jelousy in a nice way x

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Caffrin 2009-06-14 04:25:52 PM

  O.O
  I'm in love with this story. I don't think I've read anything this good in months.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-06-14 06:06:14 PM

  yay!
  i feel like such an evil human in saying that.
  kinda giggled when peter said fuck you. sorry.
  
  xo

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) let_it_go 2009-06-15 02:18:11 AM

  -jaw drop-
  
  damn.
  
  you know, i can never actually come up with something ridiculous and awesome to say on certain chapters of stories.
  this is one of them.
  
  DAMN.
  urrrrghrrr. SO GOOD.
  
  alright, there. i'm in love with this.
  haha.

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