(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-15 02:20:32 PMHOLY SHIT!!!! THIS WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!
I don't bullshit people either. So that's the truth. :)
I have to admit when I was reading that Brendon was all muscular and was thinking he could take her down easily and whatever, I was like 'okayyy, cool. thats cool', but than when it was like he's a vampy I was like 'ohhhhhhhhh I get it! That's awesome!'.
But serisouly, amazing start. :)
And I liked how you incorperated each character's hobbies into what they were doing. Very cool.
Reading all the couples made me smile. Very cute. :)
And it's no biggie on not including my description, dude. No worries. :)
I love this! Update soon!
(#) CaroBECKETT 2009-06-15 03:09:25 PMDude, that was an awesome start.
Paige . . . Dating hurley. . . I would've done the same except I would've probably slammed him into a concrete wall. Just saying.
Gabe and Natalie are cute, and everyone knows that (she won't let me forget it)
I can't wait til the next chappy
(And it has nothing to do with the fact that you will eventually elaborate more on beckett and I... NOTHING to do)
Anyways, great start, and much like Natalie said, we don't bullshit people, If I didn't like it, I wouldn't be writing this.
And yay for non typical vampy stories.
- SO GOOOOODDDDD.
i'm sad i missed the auditions (i was pretending to be a bear in hibernation) but, i love how this seems to be going... like, Bren being all INSTA LOVE xD its cute.
AND, its a different take on a vampire story too. high school and what not. so cute.
(#) BonePalacePaige 2009-06-16 10:53:23 PMOooo :D
this is cute.
Aha, I lahvs escape the fate.
I really like the way this was written, idek, i just like it alot ^^
Ryan is a love sick hormone xD :3
Vampys. I like them. And high school. Well not high school school, but you know what you mean.
Well, I am pretty much brain dead at this moment in time, but I really liked it :D
P.S. I know its late in the story, but can I has a part in story? Pwease?