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Chapter: 003

This Town Is Your Grave - Innerpartysystem

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2009/06/19 - Updated: 2009/06/19 - 4231 words

Reviews

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-06-19 01:22:51 PM

  Mind blowing, original, ect. Here's a thought: how about you write a shite chappy for once, mind blowing gets boring after a while you know and it would improve my writing self-esteem. sigh woah I think this is my longest review ever you should be grateful. Lol update soon!
  

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-06-19 01:28:35 PM

  Fuck you ficwad! Anyways, mind blowing, original, ect. Here's a thought; write a shite chappy for once, mind blowing gets old after a while and it would improve my writers self-esteem sigh. Loved it now get typing the next one, lol take your time.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-06-19 01:28:38 PM

  Fuck you ficwad! Anyways, mind blowing, original, ect. Here's a thought; write a shite chappy for once, mind blowing gets old after a while and it would improve my writers self-esteem sigh. Loved it now get typing the next one, lol take your time.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-06-19 01:36:40 PM

  This is hard to write cause I got acrylics but ill try
  
  Dude, pj nneeds to talk
  
  They can't all die!
  
  I lllove trick and tabatha
  
  Joes drugginess bothers me
  
  This was a really great chappy, I've got so many things to say but writing it is a ppain
  
  Good job
  
  Update soon
  
  -caro

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) bloodyvalentine 2009-06-19 06:41:16 PM

  love it, its amazing
  But why is pj so strong and not caring of her friends/family?

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) let_it_go 2009-06-19 06:49:24 PM

  o.o
  
  fuck.
  
  so good. i legit, can not put into words how good this was...
  
  and on that note...
  love it. xD
  
  

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-19 08:01:57 PM

  Raises hand Honestly, who who wouldn't hate her at this point?
  She's not the "bad guy" thats for sure, but definetly evil.
  
  It's painful reading this.
  POOR PATRICK!! I love that man.
  And yeah, I pretty much feel bad for everyone (yepp, even PJ).
  
  Those damn humans.
  
  Amazing dude. :)
  Loved it.
  Update soon. :)
  -Natalie
  
  

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-06-20 06:21:20 AM

  Goddamnit, it's kind of hard for me to hate PJ.
  1. Her nickname is PJ, come on!
  2. Sounds like she's getting cabin fever with all them peeps.
  3. She doesn't speak. Usually when people don't speak, I think of them as Silent Bob. And he's fucking hilarious.
  
  Not intending to sound mean, btw.
  
  But aw man, the Patrick.
  And the Pete
  and drugged out joe
  and tabatha
  and animalistic andrew.
  :(
  
  just. the patrick. D:
  xx

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Caffrin 2009-06-20 07:04:55 PM

  D: I'm not fond of PJ at this point, but she's gonna talk, right? ...right?

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