A rather sad oneshot, poem if you will... told in Frank's POV.
(#) figilio_vampiri 2009-06-21 10:00:58 PMOkay, normally I avoid these types of stories like the plague, because...normally, they're pretty bad, cheesy, OTT. I didn't like that you took what could have been an entirely different ORIGINAL piece and made it Frank's POV, but that's personal choice. So, I didn't love it or LIKE LIKE LIKE it, but the slight rhythm gives it charm. And I can see the potential, very much so.
Author's responseWell everyone has their opinions..Thank you reviewing still.
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-06-22 12:11:18 AMReally cause i LOVED this!!!! Haha sorry i was just reading the other persons review. I liked the rhythm i think it added a lot to it. The story was so sad too, poor Frankie. Well i enjoyed it, i think your a very good writer!
Author's responseAww thank you. Yeah I thought this was pretty much garbage, but thank you so much for reviewing (: I appreciate that very much (:
(#) mysilentromance 2009-06-22 09:00:49 AMI loved how it was a poem instead of a story. The rhythm was very good and it helped make the piece even more enjoyable. Very well done and I hope to read more from you.
Author's responseThank you so much for reading and reviewing.
As for the poem, it wasn't my intention for it to come out that way, but I guess it just happened (:
Thank you again! (:
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-13 03:20:11 PMI'd say it's in the middle wow LoL
Good wow because it's unique, and I don't remember reading a poem in Frank's pov :)
Bad wow because suicide and Frank killing himself is just so cliche' :) And yesh, I realize this is old.. LoL
I make WAY TOO MANY FACES!
But I make faces when I'm irritated..and I'm irritated right now because my fic isn't being rated...:( Oh well. Whatever, girlfriend! Ha ha...yeah, I'ma shut up XD
Author's responseYeah I thought about that, it did seem pretty cliche, I should've switched roles, but I just thought it was better this way.
For some reason I like writing oneshots better....I dunno why, maybe because I'm better at it lol.