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Chapter: 004

Never Take Friendship Personal - Anberlin

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2009/06/26 - Updated: 2009/06/26 - 3112 words

Reviews

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-06-26 10:15:01 AM

  In fucking tense dude.
  
  Okay, tabatha has annoyed me since the start, now I want to drop kick her.
  And I get thefeeling that PJ is a little jealous of her zand joe.
  I think she shouldn't let pete die, I mean, come on, pete loves her, like unconditionably, that's his baby sister, and I think some part of her must still love him. She can't let him die, not like that.
  Trick is a douche. End point.
  Where was andy? Idk.
  Joe's drugginess annoys me.
  
  I get a feeling this story is about to get much more interesting, and am kind of stoked.
  Bwahaha.
  
  Pj is hxc.
  
  -caro
  
  P.s. Update soon before I punch someone.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Caffrin 2009-06-26 03:50:02 PM

  O.O I your right, I was suprised. That's great. I never would have seen this coming.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-06-26 05:35:24 PM

  I never really liked Tabatha either.
  
  I'm kind of agreeing with PJ on this one, but I do wish she would save Pete. He loves her. Can't wait to read more.
  
  
  Anyways awesome chapter (:
  
  More soon.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-06-26 07:58:20 PM

  Gosh PJ is a scary woman, bloody hell! It's so twisted, they are all so twisted...With this story I kinda wanna cover my eyes but can't, cause I need to know. To finish: seriously original as ever, update super fast sonic the hedge hog style please. And I must say; appropriate tile. (Here, here)
  

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) lyrical_lies 2009-06-26 09:21:25 PM

  uh why did it have to be so short?!? i want more! MORE!!!!
  
  lol i want to know what happens its such a good story! i want to know what pj does!!
  
  uhg i cant wait!! (no really i cant!)
  
  but still
  love it
  love you
  update real soon!!

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-06-26 09:45:04 PM

  Ok, now PJ i sstarting to scare me just a little. i do like the part about MAGIC though! :)
  and yes. i do take emo views on things :)
  Happy unbirthday
  x

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-27 04:33:32 PM

  Whoa. Pretty fucking epic.
  
  Okayy, is it wrong of me to sorta like PJ? I mean, I know shes sorta a bitch and uber creepy, but shes got balls to do all that shit.
  I respect her views. Even if theyre reallyy fucked up.
  
  Tabatha is just a fake.
  Like, you know when the joker is talking about he knows people better than a anybody else becuase he saw their 'true' self before they died?
  Yeah, shes prbably the person thats like 'ohh id die for you guys' but than when it actually comes down to it shed beg for her life.
  
  But hey, I'm not trying to judge.
  
  PJ needs to stop being such a bitch and save them.
  If she hates tabtha that much than she doesnt have to save her but at least save the boys!
  Pete is the hero. He's SUPPOSED to live.
  And Trick is the pessimist you just have to keep around.
  Joe is the cute blonde. He cant die. D:
  
  Ahhhhh LOVVED IT!! :D
  Update soon. :)
  -Natalie
  
  

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) let_it_go 2009-06-30 06:08:59 AM

  SHIT SON.
  
  so good. i pretty much was all over this thing, going "HOMG SAY WHAT?!" when i read the thing of the rust, and water drip... xD
  
  i need to stop now. haha.
  
  anyway, i loved it, and it was super epic, and amazing... as per usual
  
  update soon love. it's necessary. =]

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