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Chapter: 005
8 ReviewsCalling All Skeletons - Alkaline Trio
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Black Lines To Battlefields
(#) let_it_go 2009-06-30 07:42:28 PM
jesus.
WHAT?! PETE?! HOMG.
that dick... but of course... you know, he was five... but... granted he had to have known...
and there i go, thinking indepth again.
on that note... PJ is creeping me the fuck out dude. legit, it's creepy shit. but i like it... because it's creepy. haha.
update again, soon. muahaha. -
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(#) Xnataliex 2009-06-30 08:02:24 PM
Welcome to my world of short chapters; isn't it great? So Pete tried to drown PJ? Hmmm, thats a sibling fight too far I think. Sonic the hedge hog! Lol. Your lucky I don't sleep, or I wouldn't of reviewed now. Nice update!
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(#) CaroBECKETT 2009-06-30 08:46:34 PM
Oh fuck shits.
There's so many bad words in this its starting to sound like one of my stories o.o
Ah shit.
Petes insane, poor him, guilty fucking conscience.
And dude, im going to die. Ah. Cliffies are a bitch.
dies due to cardiac arrest caused by cliffies on fanfiction
And....they have to follow PJ, except well Tabatha who has to get hit by a truck. And they all must escape and take over the world
ominous theme music
Im stoked.
Seriously.
I lovers yous brookes.
-caro -
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(#) lyrical_lies 2009-06-30 11:32:13 PM
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU??????? you cant doooo this to me!! i cant take the suspence........
ugh ive cool down ... alittle ... maybe...
so anyway fucking love this short and hell chapter!! (im still mad at you for that) i love it soooooo much!
i totally saw it coming tho but not a bad thing ... im half physic ya know....or maybe im just plain old crazy...
i love pj tho we have alot in common :O how cryptic
so hope you kill tabby in the next chapter...but then who would we hate?? certanly not pj!! fuck everyone who hates her!
anywho... love this story till the day i go scenile then ill love it all over again!! miffed at you but ill get over it....oh look i did!! and finaly update very very very very very very fucking soon!!!
lots of love
hayden -
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(#) shehadtheworld12 2009-07-01 10:20:35 AM
Oh shit. I think I just died from the pure deadly awesomeness of this chapter. Cliffhanger Why would you do that to us??? xD
Anyways....
Whoa!, Pete trying to drown PJ.
But PJ is officially ace (:
Hehe I love everyone who says Tabatha should die, cause I agree (:
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(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2009-07-01 11:19:57 AM
Oh man. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I was so into this story that I forgot about my ramen noodles, and they burned. :[
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(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-01 06:19:12 PM
Holyyy shit. D:
PJ returns! I don't care if it's for horrible, insane reasons, because serisouly I don't think I could read Trick, Pete, or Joe being killed. It's just. No.
I don't really care about Tabatha. I mean, maybe she'll prove not to be so annoying but for now... yeahh..
Poor Pete. I so know what he means. Well, nit really considering Ive never been a 5 year old boy who trus to kill his baby sister , but you get the point.
We all feel for the guy. I just wanted to hop in and give him a hug.
Welllll I dislike cliffhangers. Just sayin'. B
And this one if like I serisouly might die if I don't read the rest.
Lovvved it. :)
Loves youzz.
-Natalie -
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(#) Chicago-Kid 2009-07-01 06:28:17 PM
oh my fucking goodness!
well hope you know i feel like writing about something shitty happenings in pete's direction right now!
oh well. i need to stop dissing/offending you in reviews.
much love
santi