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Chapter: 006
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Black Lines To Battlefields
(#) lyrical_lies 2009-07-02 12:40:42 AM
omg no reviews????
drooling in a non-discusting way HOLY HELL! i love this story can i just say??? i think i like it better everytime i read it!
i dont know why it isnt already but its going to be my mission to make this a green story! cause really now its one of the best sixteen candles spin offs ever.. and i mean that in a good way!! just in the way fob are vampires...thats it! so sorry no ofence ment!!
pj just keeps getting better and better i love her and kinda wish she was real cause that would be totally bomb!! uhg and thank you for not killing pete!! but what about tab? i thought i could deal with the still present bitch...turns out i cant...that dude needs to go pronto! on the other hand i dont want her to go .. but dont listen to me its your fucking story and everyone knows im crazy as pj so...
love the story..been a fav from the start
love you cause your amazing
update real soon!!
lots of love
haydenAuthor's response
eee thanks so much! :D
None taken, that’s probably one of the best compliment’s I’ve received :D
Eh, I’m still debating what to do with Tabatha.
Love you too, thanks so much < 3 -
Black Lines To Battlefields
(#) shehadtheworld12 2009-07-02 02:39:45 PM
I would've reviewed sooner, but the damn cache error is a bitch! Sorry, I had to wait till the next day to review >:(
Omg, I'm like bouncing on my seat cause this chapter was the best!
Hehe you got me, when PJ slipped her foot against Tabatha's face, I sort of punched my fist into the air (:
More soon! more soon!
It's getter better and better!!Author's response
ugh I know wtf ficwad.
AHHAH that’s so great omg :’D
Thanks! -
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(#) Xnataliex 2009-07-02 03:01:53 PM
Ficwad I hate you. Ahem if I updated too much I would get writers block and then you would be left sitting on a cliff hanger for ages while I recover so there :-P. Amazing shit as always. Make sure PJ kicks Tabitha harder next time kay? I forgot people auditioned for this, bout time you stuck them in. See this review? It's twice as long as what you review me hint hint wink wink. :-D
Author's response
team: ficwad sucks. I’m srs considering making jackets. Or wristbands.
I know, shocker right? It’s like “oh hai no I didn’t forget about you~”
hint hint wink wink I have review block so it’s not really my fault. I will try harder though :D -
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(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-02 05:35:30 PM
Blahhhhhhh ficwad didnt post my first review. -.-
YAY! PJ came back even if it was for horrible twisted reasons.
I mean honestly, NO ONE wants to read that my three favorite boys (well, I was going to say four but andy isnt getting killed) IN THE WHOLE DAMN UNIVERSE getting killed.
Serisouly.
Tabatha...Ive already explained my dislike for her so its pretty odvious that id laugh my ass off reading that she got kicked in the face...
POOR PETE. I know how he feels, well not really considering Ive never been a 5 year old boy trying to kill his baby sister but you get the point...
I wanted to just jump in and give him a conforting hug.
Welllll I dislike cliff hangers dude.
Like DISLIKE. Like HATE cliff hangers.
I might very well die.
If you dont update soon.
Just sayin'.
Lovvved it. :)
-NatalieAuthor's response
ok really now, let’s kill ficwad. This is some bullshit.
I know I wish I could just write a group hug in for Peter but it wouldn’t exactly fit =/
and oh shit you’re gonna hate me for this one then…
thanks though! :D -
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(#) Caffrin 2009-07-02 06:24:05 PM
your cliff hangers kill me.
And haha everyone hates my character. I'm beginning to dislike her a bit too >_>Author's response
ick sorry, here’s another haha.
Awww I’m sorry. Honestly, PJ was supposed to be the cray cray one everyone hates but somehow people like her =/ Someone’s gotta be the bitch though, right? Sorry again, now I feel bad D: