Druid is on the run. He hopes to find salvation, but is optimistic. Hp crossover, first few chapters TT universe.
- Not bad for an original character / crossover story. However it does feel a bit rushed. I think it would benefit from about as much text as you've got here introducing Druid and giving more of the setup with Nacallin. The setup of the encounter with Blackfire is also more than a little rough.