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Breaking the Chain

Because the links should have never connected in the first place. A bitter Repliku’s desperate attempt to make sense of it all. Riku Replica one-shot. Major CoM spoilers. My first fanfic - pl...

Category: Kingdom Hearts - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters: Namine,Sora - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2009/07/05 - Updated: 2009/07/06 - 1091 words - Complete

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• Breaking the Chain

  (#) alinta 2009-07-11 05:49:48 PM

  Wow. You say this is your first story? You sure about that? Umm, wooooooow. "Riku's" emotion seemed so geniune, and your reasons for it were so logical, the "" did a great job of emphasising how he wasn't the real Riku.
  
  (Last line was really mysterious, length was appropriate, so many awesome lines that I would've looooooved to have written myself. Can't find that much to concrit, with my experience, I'd probably just be grasping at invisible straws.)

  Author's response

  Aw, thanks for the well-thought-out review!
  
  Inspiration rarely strikes me - when it does, I'm either too lazy or too busy. This is the only completed thing I've got - and it's from a few years ago. (I stuck it onto fanfiction.net first) I really should write more. ;^^ Still, it's wonderful to see this little one-shot's appreciated!
  
  I had been roleplaying for awhile before I wrote this, but I'm not sure if that really counts toward writing experience.
  
  Seriously, thank you for the honest commenting. It gives me that much more of a boost. :)

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