Harry prepares for the summer
(#) paulblay 2009-07-15 02:07:06 AM
This is shaping up to be an OK story, but rather lacks flair. The critical point will be in the next few chapters where we should get to see whether there will be anything to make this 'Harry gets serious and trains' story from all of the other ones.
(#) kelwin 2012-07-07 06:02:50 PM
I think this could be a very good story. it is in the early stages yet but shows great prommice. i think you need to work on length a bit but that may come in time but as i saida good start to what i hope will be a very good fic.