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• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) dennisud 2009-07-09

  Neat harking back to the 60's not just the Binds films but the original series too. harry should have asked the Admiral of he had a Malfoy for an ancestor!
  
  Also I see the years rolling along.
  
  Finally when are they gonna have kids!
  
  dennisud
  
  Still Miss Hermione Luna and the rest!
  
  Hope you write a future story with the Ministry 6 go along together!

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Pointer 2009-07-10

  A quiet two years, eh? I'll believe it when I see it.
  
  Enjoyed it.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) erik 2009-07-10

  A great chapter, with hints of Section 31. Thanks.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Wonderbee31 2009-07-11

  Fun section, and liked how Section 31 is hinted at, but not shoved into the picture, as well as Hui getting more than a bit angry at Harry, and wondering if he didn't jinx themselves with his last thought concerning Vulcan LOL.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) BenRG 2009-07-11

  Interesting enough chapter. It's good to know that the Mauraders' spirit has survived to the 23rd Century.
  
  I think that the most significant part of this chapter is that Section 31 has been sniffing around Harry. I wouldn't put it past them to attempt coercion on Harry (threatening Hui or the magical community in San Fransisco). All for the 'greater good', of course. Harry will doubtless consider it a bitter irony how those words are always used by alleged good guys to make his life worse.
  
  My worry is, if they can't get Harry, Section 31 may try to get to Voldemort. Think of what he achieved - near immortality and so many other things. This could easily get very nasty.
  
  BenRG's Rating: 7.5/10

  Author's response

  I'm glad that you caught the reference to section 31's interest in Harry and Hui. I don't know if I'm going to go any further with it, but if I do in a later chapter, remember that Harry has an open hunting license to do whatever he wants to with any operative that tries anything to coerce him into that business. He could in theory kill the operative in the vilest way possible with absolutely no recriminations on his part, or he could be a lot more "creative".
  
  As for Section 31 trying to get
  Voldemort out of Hogwarts. They cant, nobody can. One thing that I hinted at was the wards around the castle getting more powerful the closer to the castle grounds you get. I'm leaving those wards as being positively lethal for anyone just before you get to the castle's grounds. That being said the only thing that can get through is a Phoenix and whoever it is carrying. The only Phoenix that anyone knows about is Fawkes. Do you honestly think he is going to help section 31 out?

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) TurtleBlue 2009-07-11

  Another excellent chappie, thanks.
  
  Will a segment of MAD's Spy vs Spy antics show up in the future?
  
  Turtleblue

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) ShadowRyan 2009-08-25

  Interesting... I wasn't much a fan of Star Trek but after this story so far I think I might look around for some episodes. Please more chapters? I like this story so far. if I knew how to rate I'd give 5/5.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) dimriver 2009-12-06

  Fun story. I like how you have the magic really fry tech.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) twistyguru 2010-05-12

  Well!
  Very nicely done, meshing the two worlds together. The magic/tech clash (aka 'fry') is a nice touch, as is the possibility of non-human witches and wizards.
  I wonder what they'll find on Vulcan?
  And...I'm also wondering if Fawkes couldn't flash Harry into the Gringotts catacombs? That would solve one problem (and perhaps more, if more books could be recovered from the vaults of families long-dead).

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Staryfury0901 2017-10-12

  While I'm finding reading this quite enjoyable I can't help feeling like I've read it before. Though, so far at least, I don't remember any of it. It's just this really strange feeling that I have read it before. Anyways, I thought the idea of leaving Slimmer behind as a calling card was great. Of course had Harry left two instead it could've really sacred them shitless. Just think, Slimmer inside and Hedwig floating around outside. You do realize that if the ol' brainless wonder blunder learned about either one he'd be very disappointed in Harry for it. On the other hand, the twins would likely fall down laughing after learning what Harry used Slimmer for. God only knows how Hermione or Ron would react! James and Sirius are likely up in Heaven rolling around on the floor laughing at it also. I can't even guess how Lily's reacting! There's not much consistency about her in fanfiction.

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