Bob takes action and Gerard receives more bad news
- Hi tnere Sas,
Poor Frankie!! Your are so right in saying there is more than one way to be injured.
That doctor was an asshole, yay for Bob!!!
What is Gerard going to do with War and Apathy trying to get them to fight over what to do about Gerard. I really hope they don't give in.
I hope Gerard has his own four horsemen willing to fight on his side til the end!!
I love this story!!
Author's responseThanks so much for reviewing! Glad I got it done before you went away.
I'm so pleased you're still enjoying it!! You're one of my stars! You always review! :D
Yeah, there are some tough times ahead for Gerard and the guys. Let's hope Mari and Richard can help!
Gonna work on my FOB fic next, but more over here and Master of Puppets, Famous Last Words and the new one soon!
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-07-14 11:58:24 PMOh my goshness I would be all over that doctor..be all like "You're such an idiot blah blah blah I can't believe you blah blah blah.." Yeah..so anyhoo ^^
Flippin' AMAXING chapter, Miss Sas-oh-frass (L o L?)
And once again..WHY AREN'T PEOPLE REVIEWING?! Grr it makes me unhappy, because I mean obviously this isn't exactly an easy story to write, right? Ha ha..two different words..same sound..ANYHOO!
I was thinking about writing something, and you're clearly a good writer, so could you check out my idea thing I posted? It should be up on the list of fics eventually(if you have time of course).
Update soon, hunny bunny!
PS. Sorry about all the pet names..I get excited sometimes ^^
Author's responseLOL! All these different names!! It's pretty cool actually :D Certainly made me smile!!
But thank you so much for the compliment about my writing. It has taken me a VERY long time to accept that I may be even half-decent at it and I still think I've got a long way to go.
I've already put a note on your story idea. I think it's great that you're trying something different and I'm looking forward to reading it.
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-07-15 12:11:29 AMThis one one of the best chapters yet in terms of dialog I thought.
"Weird, eh? The things you believe you want and then when you get them, you really don’t." Ha! For real, huh!
And the bit about Death's hair and Apathy being very good at his job? Brilliant. Loved it.
Author's responseWow, thanks!! Dialogue is an area that I know I need to improve on and this really cheered me up! Thanks so much!!