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Chapter: 008

Headfirst Slide Into Cooperstown On A Bad Bet - Fall Out Boy

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2009/07/13 - Updated: 2009/07/13 - 2215 words

Reviews

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-07-13 04:40:19 PM

  Holy shit Brooke, this is soo good.
  
  Loved the werewolves :]
  
  And id write a super long review today but I suck, and have a headache so ill just tell you, this kicks ass.
  
  :]
  
  And im intrigued, they must save pete and pj cause wtf, ill die -dies- like that.
  
  And then monica will complain
  
  I know you don't care but HOMG home run derby starts in twenty minutes D:
  
  Anyways, this was fabulous, the werewolves are kickass, and I want to know what happened to pete.
  
  Keep geeking out.
  Love always.
  
  -caro

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-13 04:59:17 PM

  Ahh dude. Werewolves are fuckin awesome!!!
  
  Alex... That suppsed to be yo Alex or just some Normal character? :P
  AND POOR HENLEY. having you hert ripped out shudders Is soo not a good thing. :O
  
  I alllllways draw a blank when reviewing your stories. It sucks but it's the truth. -,-
  Probably because all of your chappys are soo intense/epic/amazing!!
  
  And was Gabe the like head werewolf or something?
  Cause it sorta sounds like that. :p
  
  But yeahh. AMAZING DUDE.
  I loved it.
  Love ya.
  -Natalie

  Author's response

  No that was Alex Suarez :(
  
  Henley is a tough cookie, she's gonna be a-ok.
  
  aww well thanks :D
  
  YES. Which means you are also a woman in power muhahaha >:D
  
  Thank youuuu

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-13 05:01:01 PM

  ps- PJ and Pete better be rescued! D:

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-07-13 05:20:22 PM

  I am shuddering. Is that even how you spell it? Who fucking cares anyways. Your life is over? Join the club chick(en). Amazing as always. Ewww ripping people up: E.R makes me squirm D: never mind reading about that shit. So If I have to bow to the queen of cliffies again I will get back ache so fucking stop. Seriously. Do not kill Pete it is against the law. Understand? Don't make me cry :'(. Update asap. Because all I do these days is review and people don't update enough. I am waiting for wed too :-D
  

  Author's response

  ahahaha we needs jackets for said club.
  ick, sorry :(
  there wasn't much of a cliffie on this. if none at all! better y/y?
  ahaha yeah pretty much the same for me too. imma do my best to be faster i swear :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Caffrin 2009-07-13 05:55:34 PM

  The werewolf was awesome. The details are just great. Can't wait to see what happens next :3

  Author's response

  aw, thank you so much! :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-07-13 05:56:58 PM

  I like the people ripping :)
  Go werewolf powers and crap. Except I like Henley so she better not die.;
  Oh I don't want anyone to die, who am I kidding?!
  But it'll happen.
  Massaccres are funny!
  
  Love,
  Crystal.

  Author's response

  Henley is a badass MC. She's gonna be fine.
  
  lololol girl you are fucked up, but I love you anyway :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-07-13 09:35:38 PM

  ah,I love every detail! Keep it coming! (:
  
  Go werewolves! xD

  Author's response

  thanks! :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) lyrical_lies 2009-07-13 11:16:04 PM

  NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! petey cant die!!! he just cant! how the hell could you do that! i do hate you....jk im over it now...but NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ita just not fair!! have some cazy shit happen and pj saves him! (even tho shes like dead right now thats alright she can come back)
  
  ugh!
  well anyway im of to watch true blood....fucking awsome show btw if you havent seen it i sugest you do so...and fast!!
  
  haha annyway love it love you update really soon
  
  lots of love
  Hayden

  Author's response

  peter is fine (as you can see/read) lol
  
  eh, i've heard tons about it but i've never seen it, but i may just take you up on that recommendation.
  
  thanks loverly :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) let_it_go 2009-07-14 03:33:10 AM

  WHAT?!
  
  so, i pretty much was all confused at the beginning, then i realized that it was part of the story, and i was just being delirious because i was half asleep.
  
  but, on another note, it was awesome, as usual!
  
  but! Pete can't die! unless he doesn't... hm.
  
  now you got me all thoughtful brooke!

  Author's response

  ahahah it's ok, I do that too sometimes. Glad you figured it out though.
  
  thanks! :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ash360 2009-07-14 07:04:14 PM

  NO!!!! Post again, you can't just end there. This is insanely awesome!

  Author's response

  don't worry babe, this is just the beginning of the story.
  
  thanks!

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