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Chapter: 009
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Black Lines To Battlefields
(#) CaroBECKETT 2009-07-16 02:19:53 PM
Holy shit Brooke, this was almost as amazing as David, and that's fucking amazing :]
Anyways, have you ever considered speech writing, because you'd do it well.
This was soo good.
I love Pete, he's so troubled, he has this hero front put up, but its so easy to shatter.
I already told you, whenever you throw me into this story, can I kill Tabatha? PLEASE.
I want to punch her.
Hmm.
thinks
Trick has to stop being the bitch in the story. He taked shit from everybody and does everythin for everybody. Holy shit.
Hmm.
I don't know what else to sya.
Update soon Brooke Coco :]
-Caro.Author's response
aww well thank you! :D
eh, maybe when I sell out at age 40 lol
Hmmm, well you called me Brooke Coco, which is like an automatic bijillion love points, so I'm srs considering it :D -
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(#) Caffrin 2009-07-16 02:21:55 PM
O.o damn. Things could get worse then the facility?that should be very interestingAuthor's response
this is all out war. i'm doing my best to keep it as horrifying as possible lol -
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(#) Xnataliex 2009-07-16 03:29:52 PM
Awww poor Pete, the thought of him crying makes me wanna cuddle him. Great update as always.Tabitha is terrible, Patrick needs to speak out but I wanna cuddle him too. What are they gonna do next? Can't wait to find out.Author's response
aw, ikr?
thank ya :D -
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(#) Chicago-Kid 2009-07-16 07:22:53 PM
Oh my goodness. I kinda wish PJ was okay so she could talk again (did she talk in that chapter?)
-you- what is it with you and pj?!
-me- like idk
Good chapter :)
xoAuthor's response
lol i'm glad you like her. she needs a crazy ass fan club :D
thank youuu -
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(#) ash360 2009-07-17 09:39:49 AM
Patrick should man up, fantastic as always. :)Author's response
thanks! you'll love the next one I'm guessing ;] -
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(#) lyrical_lies 2009-07-17 07:35:24 PM
oh god that was fantastic! have i told you how much i love this story?? well i love it!! ALOT!! its my favorite story now by far! keep up the awsome writing! its awsome!
lots of love
hayden
ps- dont you just love redundancy?!Author's response
thank you so much holy shit -
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(#) lyrical_lies 2009-07-17 07:47:05 PM
oh and i was wondering...do you post stories on any other sites?Author's response
nope, just ficwad for me. it's the only site I've come across with an actual category for FOB fics. it's a perfect organized heaven for me haha -
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(#) thnksfrthmmrs_101 2009-07-21 11:06:58 AM
i NEED to smack tabatha like right now!!!
this story is so different from anything i've read, i love it!!!
patrick need to man up.lolAuthor's response
thank you :D -
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(#) shehadtheworld12 2009-07-21 07:00:56 PM
Damn Tabatha. I want to take my fist, and just..yeah.
Patrick needs to stand up more, and Tabatha needs to shut up more (:
Poor Pete!
Update soon!! Please?Author's response
everyone pretty much does at this point lol
someone's gonna like the next chapterrrrr ;] -
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(#) Chicago-Kid 2009-08-05 12:20:16 AM
Oh hell fucking yeah I'm making a PJ fan club!Author's response
YES.