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• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) odonata617 2009-07-22

  You're obviously having fun with this tale and so am I. This strikes me as the best of the stories you have going for the wit involved. I wish that I had a bit of constructive criticism other than to suggest you check for capitalization (Penny is spelled with a small "p" at least once. And, in one reference to the Gryffindor chasers, at first blush it appeared that you were including one of the Weasely twins. Those minor complaints aside, I liked this very much including the fact that Harry is a cat (not a kneazle?) animagus instead of the jaguar he expected to be (or is there still some hope that he is only a jaguar "kitten," cub, whatever).

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) odonata617 2009-07-22

  Btw, revisiting the first several paragraphs, I think some of the expressions used are a bit awkward. First, "at" the staff table rather than "in." Second, not "to" the plans. Better to come up "with" the plans (I don't have the text in front of me so I can't offer up a tidier suggestion). Looking forward to the next bit.

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) william_b 2009-07-22

  At first glance it's kinda of a let down him being a cat instead of a jaguar...but for a thief being an ordinary black house cat could come in handy.

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) pi3142 2009-07-22

  I like the even pacing of the story and the morals. Plus Dumbledore getting a bashing is always good.

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) djhardim 2009-07-22

  Great. Speaking of Lupin the Third, what if Remus Lupin was related to the original gentleman thief - Arsene Lupin?

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) Innortal 2009-07-22

  Very funny, well done.

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) mrpietan 2009-07-22

  a kitten!!!!! What are you thinking .. besides a small cute fuzzy kitten ... hmm, well done. :)

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) juggler196 2009-07-22

  As good as ever. Stealing the fat lady and having fluffy eat professor quirrell was a nice touch. Having harry turn into a kitten, though, that was masterfull. Laughed almost the entire time. Keep up the good work and i cant wait for an update.

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) bluminous 2009-07-23

  Thanks for the reviews. Since it usually takes me a average of eight tries to upload a chapter in ficwad, The edited and more readable version is in Fanfiction.net
  
  
  http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/story/story_preview.php?storyid=5199602

• The Thief of Hogwarts

  (#) zicou 2009-07-23

  lol, an other awesome one!!!
  Continuuuuuuue!
  Z.

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