Teach me to love.
(#) E-JayLovesGerard 2009-07-11 11:53:16 PMooooh! Metallica :D Now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the lord my soul to keep. If I die before I wake, I pray the lord my soul to take.
Good song :D
just wondering, how do you say the main characters name? is it Des-er-ay?
Author's responseHi (:
Hehe, I didn't know it came out as Metallica :P
Oh it's just like that. Des-er-a. (:
- Hi there,
I love this so far. It's interesting how you put social issues now back in the early 1960s.
I feel so bad for Desera having to grow up with out a mom.
It's really well written and I can't wait for more!!
Author's responseYay I'm happy you liked it (:
I saw a movie just yesterday, and I fell in love with the setting anf time which was 1964 (:
Thank you so much (:
(#) KrissElECTRiKK 2009-07-12 05:11:32 AMI love it. And the name is really pretty. And it's different, but I like it. You are writing more, aren't you?
Author's responseThank you Kriss, I'm very pleased to see your review (:
I will hopefully have a chapter up by this weekend (:
(#) wheresyourheart 2009-07-12 06:44:59 AMwow. you are a really good writer. and its so refreshing to read something thats not the usual.
i was going to write a story in this time period and incorporate hippies/the war/woodstock. but i think youre doing better than i would. hah, so i dont want to get showed up x)
Author's responseReally? Thank you! I appreciate that very much (:
I love the 60's theme. I saw a really good movie, and I love the style is was back then. Thank you for the compliment, but I would love to read a story like yours xD
(#) wheresyourheart 2009-07-12 06:51:03 AMOH! and i also meant to say that i found this really wierd
because two nights ago i went to a show and there was a boy with brown hair, and a camera around his neck. me and him both had on the same band tee. and we made eye contact before the show.
now i havent been able to stop thinking about him... its driving me CRAZY. and now i'll most likely never see him again :(
your storys kinda like my situation, so i was like OH SHEESH!
Author's responseOh, that's so awesome, but don't give up hope, ya never know xD
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-07-17 12:43:44 AMYou should make at least one other chapter. I mean, it just..doesn't seem like it's finished, ya know?
Author's responseYeah I agree..I'm posting another chapter this weekend, hopefully I can keep it going...
Thank you for reviewing (: