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Chapter: 010

by ohhai 9 Reviews

The Bitch Went Nuts - Ben Folds

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Published: 2009/07/25 - Updated: 2009/07/25 - 940 words

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  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-07-25 11:44:25 AM

    Hahah the title/summary thing soo fits.

    Holy shit. Tabatha is such a PSYCHO (possibly misspelled) BITCH.
    Unlike Trick, Im not lost for words.
    She fucking scares me.

    Joe needs to wake up and leave before she wants to like get all obsessive or some shit with him.

    Soo she made Pete drown PJ?(it's a good thing her name isn't Bertha or something than it'd BJ :O)
    Orr did she just fuck him up making him THINK he drowned her?

    Great chappy dude.
    And this time I didn't blank it when reviewing this story (it happens often :l). :)
    -Natalie

    Author's response

    ehhh I was debating whether or not just to tell you or wait for you to read it in the story but imma just tell you because I love you Natalie:

    Tabatha made Pete think he drowned PJ. Tabatha can read minds and manipulate them. Only certain vampires have special abilities and they stick to together. Those are the Dandies. No one knows she has this power because obvs she hangs around Pete and comp who don't have powers/aren't Dandies.

    LOL @ THE BJ thing though. I just decided on PJ because you can say it like Peej which sounds like Pete and it would be cute because they're brother and sister.

    Thanks!
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) thnksfrthmmrs_101 2009-07-25 12:09:50 PM

    i knew there was a reason i hated tabatha!!!

    she is like uber crazy, so jealous...

    i think she is already obsessive with joe, but it might get worse.

    at least trick is away from her, now to find out what happens to pete....?

    Author's response

    All in good time my friend.
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) lyrical_lies 2009-07-25 10:12:47 PM

    fucking hell!! uhg im so glad!!! now EVERYONE hates tab!

    yeah seriously tho what about pete and pj??? i miss her! she was like my fictional sister!! bring her back!

    oh and the next chapter better be a long ass one!! or i might just go fucking insane!

    but as always
    lots of love
    Gray*

    * i changed my name! you like?

    Author's response

    Your wish is my command~~ lol

    IK IM SORRY I DIDN'T REALIZE IT WAS SO SHORT TIL I POSTED IT ;__;

    Yes! It's very qt
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-07-25 11:53:34 PM

    I knew it! I officially want to kill her, and let me just say I'm not the murdering type, but I'm willing to make an exception xD

    Author's response

    lololol yeah everyone ended up hating her (not what I originally planned) so I just decided to seal the deal.
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) Xnataliex 2009-07-26 04:15:28 AM

    Lol omg lol the bitch went nuts indeed! New club: tab needs to be shoved of a cliff TNTBSOAC for short :-). Woah she needs some heeelp! Patrick spoke up! Yess, update sooooon please :-D

    Author's response

    LOL I LIKE HOW IT HAS "TNT" IN THE NAME.
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-07-26 04:01:15 PM

    Everybody's going insane.
    Ha, good line. But now I hate Tabatha too much!
    VENDETTA TIME ENSUES!
    AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAA

    (i'm in the school library and it probably looked like I just tried to murder the keyboard. hoorah!)

    -Santi

    Author's response

    hahha thanks!
    LOL VENDETTA VENDETTA, KILL EL TABO! (props if you get my reference~)

    LOL NICE

    Santi indeed :D
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-07-27 07:03:55 AM

    stay awake
    get a grip and get out, your safe
    from the weight of the world just take
    a second to set things straight
    i'll be fine
    even though i'm not always right
    i can count on the sun to shine
    the dedication takes a lifetime
    but dreams only last for a night


    Sorry, I was listening to that song and had to put that somewhere. Anyways...review time.

    Sorry for taking so long.

    This was so good. I mean, I hate Tabatha anyways, but now I have a reason to kick her in the throat (if I could do that, I would).

    Nhjdxuif I love bitchy Trick, I love Trick in general, but he's so sweet he usually doesn't do that hxc shit.

    Anyways, joe, my favorite druggy hoe, whatttt I need him to get his druggy ass up.

    And where is PJ and Pete?!? I need Pete, (and PJ too) like soon. :]

    I need to know wahts next.
    And I had to reread to review.
    That's true love Brooke, true fucking love (like Molex's mole)
    -caro

    Author's response

    It's cool, I understand.

    Life size Tabatha punching bag is in the works, just for you all.

    I can just imagine Trick being all "OK TOO FAR" and slapping a hoe. idk.

    I was going to truefuckinglove you back, but now it's just FFFFFFF UUUUUUU CARO

    I still love you
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) ash360 2009-07-27 12:33:01 PM

    Tabatha is in-freakin-sane, Pete, PJ need to come back. This was way awesome.

    Author's response

    Thank you :D
  • Black Lines To Battlefields

    (#) ash360 2009-07-27 12:34:13 PM

    Oh and way to go Trick for growing a pair. lol

    Author's response

    lol ikr? you go trick coco~

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