Harry suffers a mental breakdown while being convicted to Azkaban. He serves his time and rebuilds his life away from the magical world.
(#) jabarber69 2009-07-28 01:35:46 AMYour What!?! Slow you said...? Oh, now I get it, you must be related to GOMER PYLE! hehehehehee GOLLY!
Its been awhile since I've read the whole story again, but seems to me that he's told at least mad-eye right that he was thrown into azkaban, which seems to be illegal by the way it was done, why hasnt mad-eye explained to him that NOBODY, ABSOLUTELY NOBODY KNOWS that he was in Azkaban!!!?!!! cause it sure seems like he hasnt been told that yet!
- I've ben wondering if Ezekiel is somehow connected to the Soul fragment left by Tommy! I also like how he will still fight the good fight and see how Hermione's gonna be used here. Don;t forget Luna's a perfect foil for hermione and can back up Ollivander's behavior and knowledge. make her his Granddaughter!
- What a well thought out story! I've just discovered it and I'm loving every chapter! good work.
I hope you update quickly (though not too quickly- it might come out rushed! haha!)
I imagine the next chapter will involve the finishing of the wand, bill's birthday, an attack, and luna. That seems like the next logical progression.
- It's going to be quite interesting to watch that power want come together. Meanwhile, Malfoy's had quite the experience and I wonder if enve Tom can tell what happened just from the description. I rather suspect that any attacks on Harry's friends are going to be met with surprising resistance. Meanwhile, 'twill be good to see him mingling with the Weasleys again, even if he can't be as open with them as they'd like.
- Been a lurking reader for some time. I have to say yours is the most unique "Azkaban Harry" story I have ever read, and I am charmed by the way you have brought it to this point. I hope it continues in the same approach.
The only real improvment I can see is th eneed to acquire a good Beta reader to catch the occasional word misuse or spelling error. Cause even Spell Check and Grammer Check on the computer, which would probably help, don't and won't catch them all.