Soubi's confused. He needs the pain to make it better. (Warning: although non-explicit, this story discusses BDSM relationships that are not safe or sane, and are borderline non-consensual, as well...
(#) pepi_chan 2005-06-06 09:02:21 PM
I like it! but, where's the punishment? I wanna see some lemon!! I would do it myself, but I can't write in English very well. Keep doing fics from this serie, onegai!!
(#) emarsharae 2005-06-08 01:30:10 PM
I loved it. You have talent! And I would like some sequel or next chapters... Please?
(#) blue 2005-06-25 03:43:35 AM
love it! I've been looking for Soubi fics, and this pushed all my buttons. :-) thank you!
(#) Aumy 2005-07-31 06:55:02 AM
This...is amazing. A work of art.
I love it. Nice work.
(#) SchuldigLiebe 2005-08-20 11:32:59 PM
Good story. Please, if you can, post it as http://www.Mediaminer.org
. more people go there, more people will read this. And i'm trying to get LOVELESS to be better known.
(#) eveliens 2005-10-26 06:15:29 PM
I think that this story does an excellent job of showing Soubi's thoughts. I'd imagine that in the begining, Ritsuka's reluctance to be a Master hurt and confused him. The flow was very smooth and the italics emphasized the train of thought. Wonderful job.