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Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2009/08/07 - Updated: 2009/08/07 - 2280 words

Reviews

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-08-07 03:44:41 PM

  Homg.
  Homg.
  Poor pete. Poor pete.
  PJ needs to stop bitching, no lie guy, Pete adors her, my shitty writers block is affecting my reviewing skills.
  Sorry.
  This was so good :]

  Author's response

  It's ok, thanks girl :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-08-07 07:49:03 PM

  Ewwwwwww. Too much blood. Sorry, sorry I'm sad I know. PJ needs to stfu. Seriously. If I was Pete she'd be my sheild as I ran to the man hole not the other way round. I was gonna start a Hen needs to stop clucking despair and smile club HNTSCDAS but you killed her, oh well. I have no clue about the advert you're on about but I can some what picture it. Oooh I like the

  Author's response

  Aw, I'm sorry bbdoll D:
  LOLOLOL YOU ARE THE BEST

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) thnksfrthmmrs_101 2009-08-08 06:06:55 AM

  thats not cool!!!
  
  pj needs to get over herself, idc if it's in her head or not.
  
  awwww, poor pete...i hope he's not hurt bad.

  Author's response

  ik pj is a bitch.
  He's fine for now.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-08-08 07:02:08 AM

  My review got cut off, the rest: oooh I like the hearts and ILY, i'm out.

  Author's response

  oic, lol ty I cp'd from myspace.
  ILY2
  ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-08-08 10:37:52 AM

  Ooh this one got me. It had me on the edge of my seat. Henley died? She was harsh, but she helped him alot for awhile, even though she wanted to leave PJ behind like alot.
  
  This story just entrances you!
  
  Looking forward to more (:

  Author's response

  That's what I like to hear 8D
  Yeah, she had a short life in this story, but she still had a major impact; Pete has a better comprehension of what is happening and his attitude will start changing.
  
  Thank you so much!♥

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-08-08 10:24:12 PM

  Fucking amazing!
  Holy shit dude.
  Poor Pete!
  Ahhh.
  
  Henley dead.
  Patrick and Trohman no where.
  PJ bitching in coma.
  
  Ahhh.
  And poor Pete!
  (the Russian roulette part made me laugh though. Hey Chris?)
  
  Anyway, loved it.
  Holy shit.
  Amazing.
  Cliffie!
  Update soon dude.
  -Natalie

  Author's response

  ahhhhhh TY GURL♥
  
  lol yus, nothing like a little fact to spice up the fiction.
  
  Ty ty ty! :D

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Chicago-Kid 2009-08-09 03:17:05 PM

  I lolled at the part when pj came back.
  but poor henley..
  
  heart shaped eggs!
  
  -santi

  Author's response

  ahahaa
  woooo~♥
  santi always.

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