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Not Needed

by Moonshyne 6 Reviews

The past comes back to bite certain people in the butt.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Gerard Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2009/08/11 - Updated: 2009/08/12 - 1803 words

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  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) areyounormal 2009-08-12 04:35:59 AM

    This is terrible!! The situation, I mean - not the story, the story is WONDERFUL!!!

    Poor Gerard! I know I've been unkind about his lack of understanding in other chapters, but he's really trying now and this happens!

    It's easy to say, oh, well, at least she has Bob, but I hate the thought of her staying with him by default and never really loving him.

    Someone has to fix this!! But who? Does anyone know where he's gone? Will he answer his phone? Someone should steal Matt's phone after beating him to a pulp - he'd answer if he thought it was him! Too drastic?

    Anyway! Loved it, as ever, looking forward to reading more :D

    Sas x

    Btw - do you like FOB fics? I'm writing one, but under the name areyounormal.

    Author's response

    Hi Sas,

    When I read the first sentence I was oh no I disappointed someone. Then I read the next one. I was like yay!!

    I soon as I read the second paragraph I knew it was you. LOL!!

    I know just when it was all going so well I had to do that. And we actually haven't heard the end of what happened that night I have a huge surprise maybe an eyewitness???

    We'll have to see what develops between these two now that Gees out of the picture. Hmmm could be interesting.

    Can this be fixed or is it really over there is so much drama ahead for Lys, Bob and crew. For the first time in a long time I'm really excited because I'm finally getting to the chapters that have been swirling in my head for so long. I've been working off and on on this story and now things are going to heat up all around. I hope your ready for a bumpy ride (maybe four or five more chapters and an epilogue).

    Personally I'm not a huge fan of FOB I do know a couple of their songs however it being a Sassy story I'm sure I'll enjoy it. I'll keep a look out for it.
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) cutegirl12356 2009-08-12 10:44:32 AM

    NONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOO! OMFG! This can't be happening!...Please write more!

    Author's response

    Hi there cutegirl,

    YESYESYESYESSSSSSSSSSS. This is happening. What is instore for our trio as things start to get sticky. What will now happen as the custody trial begins again. Will Gee and Lys get back together, can Gee forgive Ray?

    Stay tuned!!
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) Sassy 2009-08-12 11:35:15 AM

    Hey Moonshyne - I have a real problem remembering how I'm logged in! If you weren't 100% sure, 'areyounormal' is me (it's my FOB fics account).

    And while I'm here, I might as well reiterate just how good this whole story is, not just this chapter, which was fab, but the whole thing!!

    Sas x

    Author's response

    LOL!!!

    I love you no matter who you sign in as.

    Thanks again so much. I think I may be off to read a FOB story by 'areyounormal' I hear she's a pretty decent writer, then off to try and knock off another chapter.
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-08-12 06:28:12 PM

    Oh my gosh, I barely got home from Vegas like no more than 20 minutes ago, and I swear I had to check to see if I was missing any updates, and I smiled when I saw you updated.
    Ficwad is my obsession, great isn't it? (:
    ~~~

    Oh man, I can't believe what is happening before my eyes! Gerard completely misunderstanding the situation and Matt! Err he's a real jerk.

    Although Bob and Lys are pretty cute, I know she loves Gerard and I'm torn because I can't decide who she should be with..Gerard! Gerard come back!!!

    Needless to say I'm hooked as usual and I cannot wait for an update!!

    Lynai xoxo.

    Author's response

    Hi Lynai,

    LOL!! I did the same thing when I got back from Disneyworld. So I'm right there with you.

    I know poor Gerard he went there to find out the truth and handed to him on a plate what seemed to justify what Matt was saying.

    Yeah who will she end up with? The man she will always love and who has always loved her, or will she decide to move on? Maybe Gerard will make that decision for her? Maybe we'll throw Ray into the mix!! LOL!!!

    We'll see things are gonna really heat up!!

    Thanks for your review!!
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) doyleangel 2009-08-13 10:05:17 AM

    Oh no!!!! Matt is such an ass...grrr i don't like him. Gr lol.

    I can't believe that Gee mis-saw what was happening in Bob's house. And although I love Bob, I dont' think he should have done what he did.

    update soon!

    Author's response

    Hi there,

    Yeah Matt is an ass for setting Gee up like that all he did was cause pain.

    Poor Gerard he's certainly having a bad day.

    Yeah Bob definitely shouldn't have done that. But he just couldn't help himself. How will Alyssa react if she ever finds out.
  • Getting My Baby Back

    (#) Sassy 2009-08-13 01:05:06 PM

    areyounormal's certainly got great taste if she's reading your stories!! :D

    If you do read it, it's: http://www.ficwad.com/story/124539

    But you have to have seen the video for 'Sixteen candles' first and be aware that William Beckett of The Academy Is is the head vampire and Brendon of Panic is his sidekick (in my version anyway, I know technically it's Mike Carden, but I prefer Brendon!)
    Video is here: http://vodpod.com/watch/1251716-clip-fall-out-boy-a-little-less-sixteen-candles-

    Sas x

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