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• The Weasley Plot

  (#) BenRG 2006-04-10

  Overall a good story, although I think it ended far too quickly. I would have carried on for at least another chapter serving as an epilogue, filling out the future in a series of vinigettes, including inserts of the start of year 6 & 7, revealing Harry's girl and the final battle.
  
  The end of Dumbledore was a strange anticlimax but it fitted the concept of an old man with failing health who was steadily losing his mind. I also think that Snape's end was handled correctly too. One way or another, it was always likely that he would meet his end for treachery, either at the hands of the dark or the light.
  
  BenRG's Overall rating: 7/10

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) wolff 2006-04-10

  Too short! You had a great story going here, and then just decided to cut it off... I find that kind of disappointing. Otherwise it was quite a fun read.

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) Schnuff 2006-07-29

  good story, only the end was to short

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) scruffy1 2006-08-27

  Good idea and I like the way it played out. The more I think about it this was about the Fall of Dumbledore rather than the move of Harry to safety. I do like a good Fall of Dumbledore story though.

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) LabRat 2006-08-29

  I liked this story, especially the wacked out Dumbledore. I don't think it was just dementia at the end, he might have been smoking something too. Loved it.

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) KittyShinju 2008-03-14

  I have to agree that this was a bit too short.
  Dumbledore sounds like what I've heard about with Alzheimer's that they can get hostile.
  I think BenRG's idea of how to possibly extend the story might be nice if you ever want to.

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) zbigdragon 2008-10-27

  i liked it! VERY VERY much.

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) Merlyn_Britannicus 2009-10-14

  You wrote a good story, even if the end is a bit short.

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) spacejam1976 2010-01-06

  great story would like it to be longer and see what harry would be like after living with the wealseys after a few years
  

• The Weasley Plot

  (#) SlutPuppyInTx 2010-06-12

  Great, you write it, build it up, then speed to the end. yawns Boring! Details people, details!! Other than that, it was well thought out and structured.

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