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Yule Ball Debauchery
After a rather disastrous beginning, the Yule Ball has a much more pleasant ending for Harry and Parvati.
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Yule Ball Debauchery
(#) agouraki2 2009-10-02
best harry/parvati pair fic i ever read.Author's response
Thanks very much! There aren't all that many Harry/Parvati fics out there, in my experience, so I'm glad I could make a contribution. I've always thought Parvati is an underutilized character in smutfics.Yule Ball Debauchery
(#) Dyne 2009-12-30
Hi there,
I like this story,and I read your concern about ficwad going down.
You can put your stories in several place beside AFF and ficwad.Here some web that I know:
http://www.patronuscharm.net
http://www.restrictedsection.org
http://www.ficsite.com
http://www.mediaminer.org
You can also try to put it in fanfiction.net if you want.
Hope that help. And happy new year to you :D
DyneAuthor's response
I'll be sure to check these out. I did investigate restrictedsection.org. While the site itself is still up, it is closed to new submissions. Oh well.
This certainly helps. It's nice to have some options, so hopefully even if Ficwad does go down, the majority of you guys who read the story here will be able to keep up on one site or another.
Happy New Year to you (and all of my other readers as well!)Yule Ball Debauchery
(#) datbenik513 2010-01-22
Hi there,
Just thought to drop by and give you a well-deserved thumbs-up. There are not too many H/P fics around, so I decided to give it a try and I'm glad I did it.
I do try to forget about their ages while reading. Not because having sex in their age bothers me, rather because I simply can't imagine either of them doing it, at least their canon selves. But, it's you AU so use it as you wish :D
It IS a very enjoyable fic. Not per se because of the smut inside, although I have to admit that even the sex scenes are written ... elegantly, tastefully (on the contrary to many a smut writer here at ficwad). The emotions your characters display, their behaviour, all seem natural. Even Parvati's explanation to Harry in the first chapter seems perfectly believable and valid. And an extra kudos for your nice, literate English. It was a refreshing experience, again, on contrary to what you normally find here.
Looking forward to more.
Zoltan
datbenik513 on ficwad, ff.net and hpffAuthor's response
Thank you for the proverbial thumbs up. I'm glad so many people seem to be enjoying the story. :)
I know what you mean about forgetting their ages while reading. I tend to do the same thing, both while reading and while writing. And yeah, I can't imagine canon Harry or canon Parvati "hooking up" with anyone at this point in their lives--but, as you say, it's AU!
I don't think I've ever thought of one of my smut scenes as "elegant" or "tasteful", but hey, I'll take it! :) A reviewer on another site commented after the posting of the first chapter that the nature of the smut contrasted with the rest of the story, and upon further review, I saw his/her point. That's something I've kept in mind and tried to avoid in the later chapters, and if your review is anything to go by, I've succeeded at least somewhat.
I'm not a huge fan of the first chapter, to be quite honest. I think parts of it clash horribly. I do feel that the characters have behaved more believably since then, and I'm glad you seem to agree. I also try and look out for typos and other things that could potentially draw a reader out of the story. I know there have been several fics that I've given up on for those very reasons, so it's something I try to pay attention to with my own work.Yule Ball Debauchery
(#) wolfgang108 2014-11-27
Truely enjoy this story of yours, but it has been just short of three years since the last update on this, although you have posted new fics. Any chance of more of this one ? Thanks for sharing.
Author's response
I fiddle around with this story every so often; I did a bit of work on it within the last week in fact. So yes, there is a chance it will be updated eventually, but I'm not making any promises.Yule Ball Debauchery
(#) LegendsAvatar 2024-03-16
I will kill you. I am an admin on DreamWorks Wiki. I am cool.
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