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Lilith's Heir
Naruto was sent to hell, only to be adopted by Lilith, queen of the succubi, now watch as naruto takes what he wants from konoha
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Lilith's Heir
(#) inuboy867 2009-09-11
Your stories but you are really ruining the image of many of the characters especially the female characters I mean that was just cruel how you made Ayame out to be a Nympho slut no one does that it's just insulting to Naruto stories. Your Naruto/Digimon story is good but this one is a big disappointment sorry if this is mean but I'm being truthful to my opinion.Lilith's Heir
(#) firelord 2009-09-23
great story thank you for sharing please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allowsLilith's Heir
(#) WaterDemon 2009-09-24
I say this has to be a really wonderful Naruto-fic read here. The thing I have to say I love the most is the hell/demon world you created.Lilith's Heir
(#) Vilkath 2009-10-08
A decent idea and a nice selection of girls.. but sadly the story is mostly ruined by the way the author kills every character involved. Destroying every canon fact or personalty trait they have turning them into mindless OC sex sluts. Not mention this story really has no plot other then the lemon scenes and they are rather poorly described and planned out. Pretty much every one is insanely large, to the point of being obscene sized cocks pounding the girls in all holes at once with clones.. that is pretty much every sex scene. Just a few 'wham bam thank you mam' type of sex and no touching, feeling or foreplay. This story really seems to be from some teenager who's never even read a lemon story before.
Given the higher quality the authors other work I have to say this story would been better off with just hinting at the sex and trying push a better plot through.Truely the readers imagination would been able better fill in the blanks then what was described.Lilith's Heir
(#) Esus 2011-10-08
Erotic literature needs embellishment, but you're beyond the pale. Your sex scenes are so unbelievable that they're comical in nature and description. You also have zero development between him and the females since he just sprinkles magic slut juice around them and they become cumsluts. Seriously, if you intend to write a lemon -- either get some real experience with sex or read some erotic literature on the internet.
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