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Chapter Eight: Baptism by Summer Fire
2 reviewsven when stranded in a strange world, Harry continues to make waves. Friends are scarce, but there is no shortage of those who would like to see him drown in the swell of his own making. And what a...
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Beyond Grave Peril
(#) belthazor2 2009-09-13
Thanks... I only don't like the inclusion of Voldemort. He is so passé. Why not find a better foe in the Dresden Universe. And Harry needs some more goals or direction.
Maybe additional Power or Love with Queen of Summer/Wizard(ancient Mai!!a la drakon).Beyond Grave Peril
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2009-09-13
Pretty good update, I must say. The idea of biting one's own teeth is a bizarre one (perhaps you were looking for "clenching"), but aside from that, nothing stood out as off. The scene transitions felt a bit abrupt, but that could merely be because I haven't read this story in a while.
Looking forward to more.Author's response
Hmm... At least in Finnish you can "purra hammasta"... Also, Google proves you wrong. Perhaps it's just a rare phrase?
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