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Chapter: 014

Fine Young Firecrackers - Conitions

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2009/09/12 - Updated: 2009/09/12 - 3036 words

Reviews

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) CaroBECKETT 2009-09-12 12:29:04 PM

  Homg.
  Holy fucking shit dude.
  
  Holy fucking shit.
  
  That was sooo good.
  Homg.
  
  One. The twins are Bamfs. Like mitchell Davis and stuff.
  
  Andy is a bizatch.
  Gabe is a stunna, badass mofo, but we all knew this already.
  
  Dude, it was just plain amazing.
  
  Ahhhh.
  
  I don't know what else to say.
  The entire two chaps are way too long for me to point out everything I like, so just, amazing.
  
  

  Author's response

  tysm bb :*

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-09-12 01:13:27 PM

  HOLY SHIT DUDE
  Those were so fucking amazing. Like. Whoa amazing.
  Cadus (possibly misspelled) was so insane. Like, he reallyy was not meant to work there, but yet he was. Ahh he killed his fucking family!? He was in soo much denial [twist].... Ahhh
  He can rot in hell now that he's dead.
  
  THE TWINS. Oh. My. God. THE TWINS. Dude, my kids rule (shit, was I supposed to say that? Oh well)
  Mark and Autum made this chappy for me. Autum is so manical and creepy- in the most badass way possible! Love it! I can already tell Mark is the kid that sort of reads your mind before you speak, I know it's future not mind reading but still. Gahh that's so awesome.
  
  Yes, Im glad Gabey still has his attitude even if he's starving and tramatized and even more fucked up than he already is. Love it. Hahhah his persuassion/mind control rules.
  “Oh, I’m sorry.” His broad hand gestures were as taunting as his tone of voice, the overacting intentional, “Forgive me dearest mutt, or should I say mongrel? Maybe that’s offensive? Beast, brute, varmint, cur? Stop me if I hit one. Maybe even bitch? You prefer that you little bitch?”
  ANDY IS A BITCH DAMNIT. No matter how many times he attacks, he will always be the human's bitch. Always.
  
  Thats all I got, dhjshfjeisjd AMAZING. BOTH
  ONE REVIEW FOR YOU BROOKIE COCO, YOU GO BROOKE COCO YOU GO!
  -Natalie
  
  

  Author's response

  Yus, I am so glad you liked it! :D
  
  ilu.

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-09-12 03:50:15 PM

  Tbqh that was amazing. Cadus and his denial, the twins and their creepy ways...everything just moulded together into a seriously hard core chappy. I don't think you realise how good you are. "Ready. Steady. Aim. Fire. Still screaming". That end line really got me. Love it :-D your are also the best, ty for all the hearts. Here a

  Author's response

  ilu ty :*

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) Xnataliex 2009-09-13 05:34:14 AM

  Cut off again ficwad? Here a heart for you

• Black Lines To Battlefields

  (#) shehadtheworld12 2009-09-14 02:31:57 AM

  Gabe and his attitude, goodness.
  
  “The name’s Gabe and there’s no fucking need to stare." That just got to me! (:
  
  Amazing as always. Happy you updated, I missed it so much. Thank you for double posting xD I agree with Natalie, you just have skills.
  
  Loking forward to reading more.

  Author's response

  ahaha yay tysm :D

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