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Death to my lover

The silence brings around nothing. not even a simple answer. please r/r! oh...and another language here as well...love alway brings in questions...questions that are left unanswered but learning th...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/11 - Updated: 2006/04/11 - 242 words - Complete

Reviews

• Death to my lover

  (#) hmm...? 2006-04-11 05:24:14 PM

  ohh...it's beautiful...i love the last stanza...which shows the mystery in love!
  
  bravo kid, you did an excellant job here!

  Author's response

  Thanks! it's very hard to write about love...yet i do it all the time!

• Death to my lover

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-11-08 08:05:47 AM

  Before putting a period at the end of the line, check to see if a sentence has been completed.

  Author's response

  i'm guessing you didnt like it.

• Death to my lover

  (#) dkg 2006-11-08 10:08:45 AM

  insightful, wonderfully written, and interesting...i love it :P

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