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Lost Poems

the words and ideas move across the lake, a lake filled with forgotten poems. Please r/r! Published: 10-6-05

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/11 - Updated: 2006/04/11 - 85 words - Complete

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• Lost Poems

  (#) hmm...? 2006-04-11 05:21:34 PM

  it's almost like im in your conscious or your mind. it's lovely, and flows so nicely!

  Author's response

  ???
  
  
  that's cool :)

• Lost Poems

  (#) Rous 2006-06-02 09:45:11 PM

  This did not strike me as particularly well written. It has some great imagery, but is confusing at times. The idea has merit, but the execution does not fulfill the vision. Perhaps more work would be of benefit. It is worth the effort.
  
  Thank you for sharing.
  
  Rous

  Author's response

  Thanks for the comment and suggestions!

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