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From a Fallen Angel

by lilyqueen777 2 Reviews

A Message from a Fallen angel: let dreams come true. Please r/r! Published: 12-15-04

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/11 - Updated: 2006/04/11 - 39 words - Complete

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  • From a Fallen Angel

    (#) hmm...? 2006-04-11 05:20:46 PM

    cute! ^^

    Author's response

    :)
  • From a Fallen Angel

    (#) Rous 2006-06-02 09:48:40 PM

    I am not sure what the point is. I can surmise, but it is not clearly stated. The premise is promising, but does not pan out. The grammar and punctuation could use some help. All-in-all, a worthy effort, but it does need work. Thank you for sharing.

    Author's response

    Thanks for the comment and suggestions!

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