A Message from a Fallen angel: let dreams come true. Please r/r! Published: 12-15-04
- I am not sure what the point is. I can surmise, but it is not clearly stated. The premise is promising, but does not pan out. The grammar and punctuation could use some help. All-in-all, a worthy effort, but it does need work. Thank you for sharing.
Author's responseThanks for the comment and suggestions!