by Clell65619
17 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: R - Genres: - Characters: -
Warnings: [X] [?] - Published: 2009/09/20 - Updated: 2009/09/20 - 5239 words
Reviews
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(#) mwinter 2009-09-20 01:47:32 PM
Glad your still writing for this story. :)
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(#) daled73 2009-09-20 03:24:11 PM
And the plot continues....
what kind of idiot will Ron make of himself when he finds out Daphne G. is under invitation to become Lady BLack, to go along with Tracy's Lady Potter, and give Harry a mtched set of his own?
Neville being in that position already will probably be most helpful and supportive.
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(#) HJHOWE 2009-09-20 03:56:36 PM
Well done for a very relistic and far seeing look into how the gang would grow up.
More Chapters Soon Please!!!!!
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something I forgot to mention when I reviewed over at CaerAzkaban, I really liked the way you had Harry describing he and Dudley's relationship growing up, and I'm glad that they are still friends. I'm still waiting for Luna to make an appearance in this story, though.
Red
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Brilliang update, I loved the little changes you made in "canon" to keep things a bit more plausible. Oh, to be a realist.
Looking forward to more.
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(#) jjracer24 2009-09-21 03:23:48 AM
Great stuff, glad to see you've added to this story. Loved the way you have everyone's lives ending up after canon. I do hope you continue with this story line and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
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(#) DrT 2009-09-21 03:53:45 AM
A very different view of what could be 'real life' -- I liked it! Will Hermione get bored and hack through the last two novels?
Author's response
- I hadn't really thought about that... I'm pretty sure that the next time I'm mentioning the series will be when Hermione mails Harry a preview of the epilogue...
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(#) jabarber69 2009-09-21 07:48:18 AM
coool wasnt expecting anymore to this outstanding story, but hey like this chapter as well as the rest...looking forward to the visit of the clans to the big apple...and I for one think ole neville and harry are both two lucky SOB's
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(#) DJ32 2009-09-21 08:47:49 AM
This is one of the best post HW fics that is not ongoing war based I have read. Thanks for sticking with it.
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(#) daled73 2009-09-21 04:21:47 PM
One small quibble, about a missing comma...
Tracey pulled his trousers down straddled him,
If she was already straddled of him, pulling his trousers down would be VERY difficult. However...
Tracey pulled his trousers down, straddled him, and brought her lips
you see the separate actions, separated by commas.