- And the plot continues....
what kind of idiot will Ron make of himself when he finds out Daphne G. is under invitation to become Lady BLack, to go along with Tracy's Lady Potter, and give Harry a mtched set of his own?
Neville being in that position already will probably be most helpful and supportive.
(#) red_jacobson 2009-09-20 05:41:16 PMsomething I forgot to mention when I reviewed over at CaerAzkaban, I really liked the way you had Harry describing he and Dudley's relationship growing up, and I'm glad that they are still friends. I'm still waiting for Luna to make an appearance in this story, though.
- A very different view of what could be 'real life' -- I liked it! Will Hermione get bored and hack through the last two novels?
Author's response- I hadn't really thought about that... I'm pretty sure that the next time I'm mentioning the series will be when Hermione mails Harry a preview of the epilogue...
(#) jabarber69 2009-09-21 07:48:18 AMcoool wasnt expecting anymore to this outstanding story, but hey like this chapter as well as the rest...looking forward to the visit of the clans to the big apple...and I for one think ole neville and harry are both two lucky SOB's
- One small quibble, about a missing comma...
Tracey pulled his trousers down straddled him,
If she was already straddled of him, pulling his trousers down would be VERY difficult. However...
Tracey pulled his trousers down, straddled him, and brought her lips
you see the separate actions, separated by commas.