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Smile.

by shehadtheworld12 4 Reviews

Desirae begins to think about another special person...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2009/10/03 - Updated: 2009/10/03 - 2123 words

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  • The Lost Music Inside

    (#) Moonshyne 2009-10-03 08:26:42 AM

    Hi there,

    Just when I thought I couldn't fall any more in love with this story you amaze me. You amaze me in the description of the little things like Desirae running her fingers through the white fence to tackling a tough issue that was at the fore front of the sixties racsim. A time before equal rights before there being some form of acceptance.

    Not that it's not out there today. Anyone who would even think that is stupid. But we have come along way since then.

    I loved how you incorporated it in your story because it was so real back then. It was a sign of the times just like the knee high dresses.

    I love this story and can't wait to see what happens. I believe this has potential for some interesting happenings for the Bryar family.

    Until next Saturday.

    Author's response

    Hey there (:

    Thank you so much, I greatly appreciate that. I'm getting drawn into this era, I just wanted to make it real as possible, and I'm glad you thought it was. It is still out there today, and Rosalina will have more to reveal as it goes...The Bryar family can only make or break the times...

    Thanks again.

    xoxo
  • The Lost Music Inside

    (#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-10-03 01:06:23 PM

    God damn. Exactly what Moonshyne said. I've fallen more in love with it. It was just so sweet and heart-warming at the end. That's cheesy but true.

    Until next time!

    F oxox.

    Author's response

    Thank you! That means alot, and is not cheesy lol. Thanks again.


    Until next saturday! xD

    xoxo
  • The Lost Music Inside

    (#) sickly_ill 2009-10-04 02:33:58 PM

    Ugh! This story has me captivated! Bryar is nice and opening up a bit more I see. I think Bryar and Desirae should get together. I think they would make a good couple who would get each other and help each other out in bad or good situations. I love this story. It's a little slow, but good. Update soon!


    XOXOX ANDREA. =}

    Author's response

    Ugh! This story has me captivated! Bryar is nice and opening up a bit more I see. I think Bryar and Desirae should get together. I think they would make a good couple who would get each other and help each other out in bad or good situations. I love this story. It's a little slow, but good. Update soon!

    Thanks Andrea, that means alot. Bob is definitely opening up more, and I can't wait to start writing the next chapter. I think they would make a cute couple as well (: Sorry if it slow, I tried to speed up abit, but I just had to write a couple more things first. I hate when I do that, but eh...thanks again!! I'm really glad you like it.

    xoxo
  • The Lost Music Inside

    (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-08 09:26:51 PM

    That's so cute! Her and Bob, I mean :)

    Duuuude! I'm watching "The Man In The Iron Mask" with that DeCaprio guy, and it's so sad! And really irritating at the same time, I must admit.

    Author's response

    Hehe.

    I have never heard nor seen that movie (: Go Leo though xD

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