(#) shehadtheworld12 2009-10-17 01:02:24 PMDefinitely good chapter, I'm very happy Bob has full custody, and Emily is finally safe. Also that Sarah finally got justice against Lawrence, but of course she couldn't get off that easy, since she was part responsible too, nevertheless I'm happy she saw how bad it had gotten. Damn Lawrence.
Whew, for Bob and Alyssa hoping to start over in Chicago. I think that would be good. But what about Gerard?
It's good that Ray and Gee finally made up and they're friends again.
Looking forward to the next update.
Author's responseHi there,
Yay for Bob having full custody and Emily is finally safe. Yes Sarah finally stood up for herself even if it cost her.
Yeah it will be good for them to start over there. Yeah what about Gerard hmmm.
Yay Gee needed to understand everything and now that he does he realized he's the one that needed to say he was sorry.
I lost my keyboard but now have a new one and can finally type!!
(#) areyounormal 2009-10-17 03:36:43 PMHeya Moonshyne!
That was incredible! I'm quite breathless! I've rated it as moving but it could so easily have been so many others.
No matter how disgusted Sarah was it must have taken a lot of courage to go to the police. Poor Emily! The poor child scared of men because of that evil bastard!!! I'm so glad he was arrested at work, he deserves utter humiliation. When they find out in prison what he did his life won't be worth living. Good!!!
It's good that Gerard has made up with Ray. Understanding after all this time must be so hard for him.
Great idea of Bob's to go back to Chicago, get Emily far away from all the nasty memories. I just hope it all works.
Loved it! Brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's responseHi there Sas,
Thanks so much for your compliments, I really appreciate it.
Yeah it was very courageous, because she knew she would be in trouble too. She finally stood up and did the right thing. I know there goes his perfect reputation though I'm sure there are a few people who are smiling at the moment.
Yay Gerard and Ray made up yes Gerard finally has all the pieces and understands what happened on that night.
Yes it is and get Alyssa away from Gerard.
Thanks again so much!!
(#) doyleangel 2009-10-19 01:07:52 PMWow, amazing.
I'm so glad that Alyssa and Bob got Emily and that the Howells are now out of her life. Hopefully she'll come around to Bob soon and won't be afraid of him.
I'm also glad that Gerard and Ray are friends again. It's just sad when they are mad at each other.
And still...I think I want Alyssa and Bob to work...because he never really got a chance with her and Gerard had plenty. But I guess we shall see.
Author's responseThanks doyleangel,
I really appreciate that you read and review all of my stories and just wanted to let you know.
Yes she can now have a somewhat more normal family environment. I'm sure she will it will just need to take some time.
Yay for Gerard and Ray being friends again it was really hard on both of them.
We'll just have to see what happens between Alyssa and Bob.They seem to be getting along really well. Gerard has had chances but don't forget she's the one that's been lying and putting doubts in his mind. We'll just have to see what happens.
(#) cutegirl12356 2009-10-22 11:23:42 AMlove it love it love it......OMFG Can't wait to see what happens
Author's responseThanks cutegirl I'm glad that you really love it.
Hopefully it won't be too much longer for the next chapter which should be the last and then the epilogue.
Thanks for the review.