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0 reviewsa journey from changing a regular poem into a haiku, a 7-5-7 and a 5-7-5 (because people couldn't tell me which). please r/r!
1Original
1. regular poem
title: Dawn of the Evening
silver moons close away,
leaving a husky silence
before the dawn.
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2. 7-5-7 haiku version
silver moons close away, leaving
a husky silence
before the dawn of the evening.
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3. 5-7-5 haiku
silver moons close away,
leaving a husky silence.
before the dawn evening.
title: Dawn of the Evening
silver moons close away,
leaving a husky silence
before the dawn.
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2. 7-5-7 haiku version
silver moons close away, leaving
a husky silence
before the dawn of the evening.
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3. 5-7-5 haiku
silver moons close away,
leaving a husky silence.
before the dawn evening.
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