Categories > Books > Harry Potter
Christmas Fifth Year
3 ReviewsThis is the Sequel to Summer 4th year Revised. What Happens over the Holidays? H&HR...
Reviews
-
Christmas Fifth Year
(#) Cateagle 2009-11-29 10:43:59 PM
Needs a spot of beta-ing and smoothing to reconcile it with the previous story, but 'tis still a most enjoyable read and I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. -
Christmas Fifth Year
(#) badboy1cdx 2010-06-15 10:44:56 PM
Great fic! I really hope you continue it! As stated before, it does need a bit of beta-ing, specifically, Harry mentions the prophecy, but he hasn't learned it yet (at least in canon), and you don't have a scene describing how he came to learn it otherwise...Anyway, keep up the great work!