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Shadow
1 ReviewsA cute little poem about a daytime friend
Please tell me what you think. I can't decide if some of it's a little . . . off.
Shadow
At times you're here
At times you're not
And when you're gone
I wonder not
Where you’ve gone
Or where you’ve been
I wait for your return
My twin
At day you follow
In my step
You’re by my side
All day, except
At night you leave
You go somewhere
I wait for you
In this lonely air
The time will come
When you've returned
And no longer will
I be concerned
Until the sun
Goes down again
You're at my side
My shadow friend
Shadow
At times you're here
At times you're not
And when you're gone
I wonder not
Where you’ve gone
Or where you’ve been
I wait for your return
My twin
At day you follow
In my step
You’re by my side
All day, except
At night you leave
You go somewhere
I wait for you
In this lonely air
The time will come
When you've returned
And no longer will
I be concerned
Until the sun
Goes down again
You're at my side
My shadow friend
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