Golden - Fall Out Boy
- I don't think rain has ever been described so beautifully. To write about despair with such skill is a talent you have. I'm not even sure how to explain how this chapter made me feel, but I can tell you it is stunning. I don't think I've felt so attached to a characters emotions before. Fucking amazing/beautiful/fab/stunning. Omg Brooke, you put the picture of Patrick Stump killing himself in my mind. :'(
(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-11-28 08:28:39 PMThis chapter was beautiful. You really are talented Brooke muffin! No doubt.
Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I suck.
But serously, this chapter...
I've never wanted to hug somebody so bad in my life!
I felt so bad for Patrick...
Death and depression (HA. Something different from despair :x)
just everything. The way you write. It's like poetry.
And all of his sudden realizations.
I don't even know. I could ramble about this so much, but I'll spare you. :p
And I'll get out what was in the back of my mind when reading the ending... OMG FIOSJGOSJFOA TRICK. NOO. FUCK. DON'T KILL YOURSELF. TAKE THE ROPE BACK. PAIGE COCO WILL APPEAR AS A NUN AND 'SAVE' YOU. DON'T- NOOOOOOO TRICK. NOOO. FUCK ME. FUCK. AHH.
I loved it.
(#) SidelineStalker 2010-03-06 02:27:41 AMCan't even describe this chapter and it might have been a while since you last checked this.
I hope you don't get pissed off but I copied and pasted this - not for a school project but in case ficwad does shut down soon. I put full credit to your name and everything. Really hope you don't mind!
WONDERFULNESS INA BOX!
The puke bit made me laugh but then when the feet came along it was like a really big SHOCK ending.
-Chicago-Kid (my account is broken)
Author's responseaw omg not at all i am so flattered!!
thanks so much :*