this is my second mcr fanfic gnna be more graphic methinks (: also have a bit more of the toro (:
(#) mysilentromance 2009-11-11 01:26:25 PMI'm curious about the narrater of this story. Will we find out more about her? Or is it a secret ;)
I absolutely love this so far. Keep it up!
Author's responseyou'll find out more about her as the story goes on its gnna kinda be as bob finds out more about her so do the readers (: thanks for the good reveiw i usally think my stories are crap lol much apriciated x
(#) JustAPrettyFace 2009-11-13 10:54:14 PMDefanatly intersting. I hope you update real soon!!
Author's responseim trying to update as much as i can but lots of preassure on me at the moment ya know GCSE's, also my parents splitting up and just life in genral if i honest with you my longest story hasnt got any ratings or reveiws yet this has two reveiws im quite pleased thank you for the review and enjoying the fanfic (:
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-12-05 11:48:46 PMOoh, exciting!
But.. I couldn't help but notice how at the bottom of the chapter the sentences were all jumbled and stuff.. hurried? LoL I dunno. Anyway!
I like it.
Author's responseHmm I'll have to look at that and fix it it was fine when I uploaded it might been a glitch on the site but ty for the reveiw and good comments (: