(#) sickly_ill 2009-12-23I think the chapters need to be more long. But other than that it was perfect. Frank better fucking shape up before I kick his skinny white ass! Sorry. I kinda lost my temper there. Update soon!
XOXOX ANDREA. =}
Author's responseHaha yeah I suck at long chapters. Sorry about that!!
- Hahahaha. Yeah, what everyone else said.
I really felt for Mikey when Frank left. I'm here at the bank (for work) getting a million cashiers checks and reading this while I wait. I wanted to get teary eyes but I don't want the bank teller to think I'm crazy.
Its cute to see Gerard so brotherly and giving out love advice. It makes me smile a bunch.
I'm dreading the next Frank chapter. =[
Author's responseHaha awee well I don't want you to look like a crazy so it's good you didn't cry. I'm glad you liked it, and the next chapter is nothing to dread. I don't exactly want frank to be hated, but he is the antagonist. You probably won't see his REALLY good side til the end.
(#) ElaLovesYou 2009-12-24please make Frank be nice! or just put the story in his point of view for a while coz we wanna understand!!!!
Loves it bythe way!
Author's responseHahah the next chapter is in Frank's POV. You have to think of Frank as like...the worst kind of boy. Lol. I know Frank is not really like that, that's why its fiction. =]
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