It started at my toes. A pain so unbearable, unlike anything I have ever felt in my life. I wanted to scream in agony but I couldn’t make any sound escape my throat. I couldn’t move, couldn’t...
Amazing! I love it!
Please post more soon?
that would be really awkward,that wouldreally suck feel really bed for Brendon
i love it great beginning :) update
alright, that would be incredibly awkward.
i'm interested to see how this story turns out in the end, cause it's that interesting now, i can't wait to see how it is later.
What a brilliant start to the story =]
I cant wait to read more =]
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